You have stolen my heart...
dreams assured...
this heart can no longer endure the pain
that beats steadily through my veins.
Thoughts run vividly though my mind,
All my hopes and dreams of me and you, combined.
Equal to nothing.
Love, is blind...
Ur thoughts...
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this is a good poem. but it suxz how there is no such thing as love though. but nice poem.
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wow kim i really like this one. your jagged rhyming was great and i just loved the flow. really great job
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thanks Dominique =]
getting a comment from u saying u like it means alot!
ur an amazing poet =]
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wow kool a great write! keep it up
~caz~
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Great Write!!
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I really love this poem. It's true, love is blind and going through lofe blinded by an emotion is horrible. Great write
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wonderful
this is a wonderful poem.
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