forest
green canapé
furry creatures dwelling
carefree living with joyfulness
woodland
Author notes
Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines. It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.
Another form, sometimes used by school teachers to teach grammar, is as follows:
Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.
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I have been wanting to learn how to write this poetry form Amera. I was thrilled to stumble across this perfect example. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Love, Cathy
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Oh my, I love this cinquain. I think I want to live in this forest you write of.
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a lovely and cinamatic poem, this can be a fun form to play with. Well worth reading, it is laced with sweetness and beauty.
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I love the playful feel of this one. I meant I can see the reality of it, the nature, the greenery and animals. But the way it's worded, it shows the wonder, the spark of life there. The inner child playing. Yes indeed, this one I really adore.
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One of my favorite forms, although I tend to focus on the traditional form (just counting syllables) than the modern form. This is lovely, especially liked the "green canape"!
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nature ... not my type at all
but the peice was interesting
what i noticed
is that this poem is perfect
a perfect cinquain
i spelled it correctly?
omg i did
lol
how did teachers use this to teach grammer?
oh .. i get it now
oops
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ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...that feeling when you are one with nature...in the woodland...or in the forest....ahhhhhh...reading your poem made me feel that way...ahhhhhhhh..BYE!!!!!!!!!haha...
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Great job. Loved this piece. Right to the point. I love the woods. Animals and forests. You doing a great job poet. Keep it up!
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Escellent masterpiece! Considering all the technical things you have to consider....Do many more!
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cool
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