A passage to your heart is what I search for
A walk with you through paradise
A gentle kiss to make your eyes glow
And many passions in the night
To smell your fragrance from a thousand miles
And never doubt your love
A passage to your heart is what I wish for
Tender moments of your love
By Bob Fox
A contest entry
- Bronze I by Salty Hibiscus.
525 points, ended April 11, 2009, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Undying Commitment by AmberMoon.
2200 points, ended July 22, 2009, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is very tender - I wanted to take a look at you back when you began at AP - and I'm loving it!
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This is definitely a favorite too
Very beautiful. I feel speechless and not sure what to write.
Beautiful
~*Lady
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Gorgeous
Softly written...
~E.
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Ty Beth
And you are prety cool yourself. Actually beside being good looking your have a gentle way about you. thanks again
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A beautiful treasure!
This is a beautiful treasure, Bob, and it took me a long, long time to find. lol. Well worth it!
Words spoken from a man in love with a delicate beauty, a woman who touched him in many ways when they shared tender moments of love.
So rare and so lovely. A treasure here! Love this!
Kelly
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OMG THIS MAKES ME SWOON... SO TENDER, SO SWEET, SO TOUCHING.. "To smell your fragrance from a thousand miles"
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beautiful. absolutely beautiful. sweet and not cliche. then again nothing you write is cliche.
well done, my friend. great write as always.
hug.
Abby
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thanks Abby
How is my young poet friend doing? & not all word readily agree with you.. lol
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Bob this is just lovely - please read: http://oldpoetry.com/opoem/62321-Spike-Milligan-If-I-could-write-words and you just may see the similarities between this work and your own.
Both poems speak 'loudly' of the Love of a Woman - both superbly executed. Your work is intriguing me and I shall read on. - Von
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you make me smile here.
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Holy Cow, Bob Fox: :f
I think I'm in-love -with you- :P
I truly enjoyed the simplicity of this piece, and yet, atr the same time the message was conveyed to the reader just the way you want the reader to get it..... Short and, to the point......
This piece is sweet, tender, and, has passion that can be found through out the piece.
Thank you for sharing with me on this site..... ...And be blessed with love and light always.
Your friend in pen,
AngelicMistress...Tanya
*hug*
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In Love
lol than I better start writing more love poems.. Thanks poet friend
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I enjoyed reading this; it reminds me of what true love felt like..all those moons ago...
Thanks for sharing
Peace~ Mia
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very nice
Like the visions of love portrayed here, thanks for sharing and good luck in AP ,MM
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this is well put together....what we long for...what we look for in others....what we dream about......wish to participate in such a moment...in such a lifetime...well done.....best, radical
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Such a beautiful and inspiring piece.....flowed so perfectly and proved to be a joy to read....keep up the great work....smiles, Terry
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