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Eyes and Smiles

Glossed eyes waltz over the night sky,
Dancing over to each star
Glazing over the clouds
And lingering near the full moon-
But my own keep an aim on his.

Falling in a slumber,
But still wide awake-
Our fingers laced,
Bodies close
Shading the cold air.

A small smile lines my mouth-
My lips,deep with Intreset
Desire for a kiss sweeps my lips,
It lingers for a moment,
Until the wind breezes by
Singing it's lonely song
Daring my eyes to move forward
My life to step toward-
Imaginations from past poems and songs,
No longer an imagined chemistry...

Numb from the outside world,
Inspired by the inside
Words and expressions face me
Guiding me,
Surrounding you.

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  • Lady Eventide
    February 7, 2007

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    Wow!

    I like it. I love it. I want some more of it...though I believe that you have a typo "Intreset"...unless it's a real word. Great work.


  • Tenchi 7786
    January 19, 2007
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    Amazing write really! Full of emotion, and it paints a full pic, in my head! Good job!


  • January 16, 2007
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    its Beautiful