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so heavenly

love falls down on dawns quite side
silhouette tapestries
undaunted and frenzied,
dancing to the sweet
songs of childrens laughter

and you stood there
with all your glory,
defined by beauty and
its immaculate divinity

 

(oh, so heavenly)

 

luminously lush

fabulously plush 

with a wave of her hand

she can have her

way with any man

 

angelic and radiant, she

encapsulates everything

within her womb of purity

with one wave of her wing

and all deities sing songs

of jublicance and its infinity

 

(oh so heavenly)

 

to look into her fresh eyes

frosh with innocence,

is to witness the birth

of life in its finest

hour of love

 

on bended knee

i bow to thee

 

(oh so heavenly)

 

lisa,

thy fair maiden

i come to you

free from the

safety of disguise

do you see the anguish

and the torment that

lay dormant in my eyes...

 

i need your ams wrapped around me,

intertwined in something mystical,

angelical and idyllical

 

i need you to need me

oh so heavenly

i bow to thee

honouring thee

  

oh so heavenly

 

 

 

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  • OOMAZZOo
    February 19, 2008
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    She sure sounds like ur queen. Still aint met her in person?...geez...it sure is overdue...lol


  • JoFoxserian
    October 11, 2007
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    i need you to need me
    oh so heavenly
    i bow to thee
    honouring thee

    and i do need you

    everytime i read this i miss you more and more!

    i love you
    lisa


  • still crazy
    May 14, 2007
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    Sweet! Beautifully and flawlessly written. Lisa is one lucky girl!

    ~ Diane.


  • neenabean
    May 6, 2007
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    a stunning romantic write!!


    wow!!

    amazing


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    April 29, 2007
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    Special....

    A unique way of expressing true love....


  • x Bright Eyes x
    March 26, 2007

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    wow i am so speechless this was a beautiful write i absoloutly loved reading this it was a true honour reading such a write


    • the pauper prince
      March 28, 2007
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      hey thanks for the comments. this one is especially one of my faves because of the person that it is dedicated to.

      rich


  • JoFoxserian
    January 25, 2007
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    :)

    even on the worst of days just reading this brings a smile to my face, god i love you
    hugs


  • elemental angel
    January 19, 2007

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    Wonderful expression what a beautiful tribute you have written to the one you love. I really love the song like quality of this piece. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest

  • LaamRa
    January 17, 2007

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    Nice!

    It has a nice flow too. Love poems are my thing and this poem says alot about love "oh so heavenly"
    Keep flowin'.
    Peace & Love

  • pruedence
    January 17, 2007

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    Very heavenly...felt like floating on a cloud while reading this...nicely done..thanks for sharing


  • Spiritvision angel
    January 17, 2007
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    Angelic Beauty is this wonderful write! I am so glad i read it and you chose to share it.


  • JoyfulWriter
    January 16, 2007

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    Such a beautiful piece....written so perfectly and proved to be a pleasure to read....great job here! Keep up the great work....smiles, terry

  • JoFoxserian
    January 16, 2007

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    speachless

    greatly honnored and you've stupified me again, at a loss of words.............if i could throw my arms around you i would in a moment


  • Frozen Roses
    January 16, 2007

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    Beyond Beautiful

    Oh this is just so beautiful I can't think of a word to say that explains what this poem brings to the reader. But I will say it is perfect and so beautiful. I guess the best way to say what this is is the title itself.

    You have updated so much I mut say I really need to catch up! I will hopefully, I have been super busy as lately!

    Be well Love,
    ~Rhia~

    • the pauper prince
      January 16, 2007
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      i must say

      i do love that picture of you. i can finally put a face to the words...i love it!

      you sure do know how to make with me beam with pride. everytime that you comment on my stuff, i feel on top of the world. and yes i suppose that i have been rather busy of late.

      thanks a bunch


      rich

      • Frozen Roses
        January 16, 2007
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        Thankies, hehe I don't like that picture very much. But it was the best I had. It was taken in the dressing room of Yankers by a friend, she picked the clothes out and got them all way to small!
        Anyway I only say what is true love. I love your work!

        ~Rhia~


  • Goodolenad
    January 16, 2007

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    oh rich oh rich. it's BEAUTIFUL. i can't help but feel her perfection radiate off onto me. she seems perfect, wonderfully perfect. she sounds heavenly!

    it's different from all the other ones.

    it is oh so lovely. she is so, isn't she?

    it's wonderful.

    i've siad that a lot haven't i? well, i can't help but sigh. ha.

    beautiful!

    love,
    nadia.

    • the pauper prince
      January 17, 2007
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      thanks nad

      yeah she is so heavenly, beautiful...everything that leaves me at a loss of word...we besides this poem anyways.

      rich

    • the pauper prince
      January 16, 2007
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      thanks there kiddo

      i hope that she like this one...its been awhile since i have been able to tap into that vault of love, and be inspired by someone to create something. i am really proud of this one. i hope that she likes it...

      love your bro

      rich

  • the pauper prince
    January 16, 2007
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    yeah you

    you know who you are
    by far, more than
    a falling star

    i come to you
    perfectly true
    can you understand
    the plight of this man

    i'm caught in some
    whimsical dream,
    or is it, nothing
    is ever what it seems

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