so many pieces
they fall off me
so many...
Things!
they all goooo
Away,
Why does it happen
why does it change
All these things
leave my life
rearagnged.
-Chorus-
I've been up
I've been down
Somethings pulling me around
Im stuck here
in my filth
where my pieces
lie....
on the ground
--
All these pieces
Been shattered
my heart
Been battered
My cage
its been rattled
all my pieces
slice away
-Chorus-
I've been up
I've been down
Something
is dragging me around
in my pieces
--
Inflicting Pain
Never ending rain
How long will my sanity remain?
All these pieces
Inflict my pain
-Chorus-
I've been up
Now im back down
Drug around
the peices slice away
inflicting their pain
in the cleansing rain
I'm left drained
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This was a very true poem. Sometimes people just feel like they are being destroyed piece by piece, and that their life is a never ending mess. If this is about yourself, I hope that you are able to find peace and some good moments to add to it. Great job!!
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