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Spring Wind

So many poems that I've written
About love
Have been sad.
There was no chance for my
dreams to come true
For me to say
that I loved him.

But this time
I feel this time is different
Life has changed its harsh regime
On my heart
And a lighter wind has blown in
I can smell it this time;
It's lovely.
It's love.

My heart does a little dance
While my stomach flips and flutters
When I see you.
My face - fire invades my skin
And I can feel a tingling sensation
And a slight burning at the tips of my ears.

I can't take my eyes from yours.
So this time.
This Time.
Maybe, maybe I won't be alone
for Valentine's Day.
Maybe, maybe I'll have someone to
Share it with.
Maybe, maybe I'll find
that you feel this way too.
This Time.

Author notes

arrgh! I am so rusty. Still, I hope somebody enjoys this poem.

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  • queenie gold member
    January 18, 2007

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    now that sounds like love and anticipation of love.this is a refreshing piece.so simple and sweet without being sappy.it makes you want to cheer it on and hope that this time is really it.well done


  • wings of an angel
    January 16, 2007

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    This is a lovely poem that you have penned here filled with so much love well done dear poet good luck in my contest