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You Didn't Say I Couldn't

You Didn’t Say I Couldn’t 

You didn’t say I couldn’t,

so I did it anyway,

looking forward to the love

I would share with him

and making plans

for it to be perfect. 

You didn’t say I couldn’t,

but I decided that I would,

my choices are my own,

after all,

are they not? 

You didn’t say I couldn’t,

so I did it anyway,

loved him,

and let him love me,

but I was oh so much wiser

than you were. 

You didn’t say I couldn’t,

but when I did,

I thought of you,

fifteen and pregnant,

sadly ostracized by all

because of your carelessness. 

Do you know they blame me

for all your thoughtlessness,

for ruining your life,

a mere baby,

yet I’m not pregnant, Mom,

and I don’t plan to be,

until the time is right.

 

 

 

 

This is for a very special young lady who is suffering for her mother’s carelessness.  You know who you are. But for all of you, who are in this position, know that you are loved. When I became an AP mother for the very first time so long ago, I swore that I would treat my family only with love and respect. My AP family gives me so much love and joy, and they are all very precious.

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  • Truthful Princess
    January 22, 2007
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    Mom

    You're so caring and sweet! I am sure you mad that person smile!


    You didn’t say I couldn’t,

    so I did it anyway


    Those were my favorite lines!


    I loves this poem, over all it was great because it was sweet and heartfelt!


    My favorite type of poems!


    • pattyann4500
      January 22, 2007
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      She has a difficult situation, a little like yours, but she's a great girl, just like you! She's one of my new daughters as well. One day I'll have time to write something for all my family members. She needed something special at the time. Your turn will come as well. Love, Mom


  • panegyric ink
    January 19, 2007

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    I Loved the understanding that goes

    along with this. That we all make our own decisions, and sometimes for the very worst. And that, that is a part of life that may quickly alter ourselves and our family. That sometimes no matter how hurtful the situation and the outcome may be, that we live not only in a free society, but that we really live in a society that has never been more responsible, than the times we now face at hand. All the warnings that we'd ever need, if we were only to take that necessary first step to read them. Patricia, somehow, this brought a tear to my eye, that there are so many things in life, that later on, we would wish only one wish if we were ever granted any. The wish to change them. As Always, Your Thoughts Carry me to The Truths Of Our World. Who we are, that's whom ...we become.

    • pattyann4500
      January 19, 2007
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      Thank you, Brian. I so appreciate when you come by and leave such a wonderful comment. You're always so kind. Hugs, Patricia


  • My Darkness
    January 18, 2007
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    Wow, what a great tribute... You know, you never ever write anything bad! I wish i had your talent, and your heart! You are probably the kindest person I know, and I mean that.. Another amazing piece, by a wonderful woman! You are dear to me! Always!


  • owlishhunter
    January 18, 2007

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    This is a very well written piece, and shows a true talent! I love the use of "you didnt say I couldn't" over and over.

    • pattyann4500
      January 18, 2007
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      Sometimes the repetition of a phrase will give strength to the piece. In this case, it did.

      Thank you, Owl. I so appreciate your reading and commenting. Hugs, Patricia


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    January 17, 2007

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    You know Sis, your heart must be the warmest, most dearest one I've came across. You have a perfect knack of putting anyone who is feeling blue, down, worried or in some form of trouble at ease through your words.
    You have again, written an amazing piece that eminates your strong yearning to make anyone feel loved, and let them know that you are there for them. No wonder I was drawn to your heart and your magical AP family, you simply are the most devoted friend or relative any one of us would be proud of. Thank you for being you.
    Your wee bro. Always.

    • pattyann4500
      January 18, 2007
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      Mikey, I just adore you!!!!! You're the sweetest little brother (but the worst realtor) a girl could ask for! I read the poem my little one, Truthful Princess, wrote for you the other day. Is she adorable, or what!!! She has you pegged already. Thank you, Sweetie. Hugs, Patricia


  • skitza
    January 17, 2007
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    Wow. This is lovely.. and sad.. and very hard to understand.

    • pattyann4500
      January 18, 2007
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      Sorry, Lauren. I didn't mean to make it hard to understand. Maybe it's one of those situations that you just have to know the story. I think I confused a couple of people.


  • Theater Of Dreams
    January 17, 2007

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    Unconditional Love.

     Patricia...

    Just a wonderful piece for someone who might feel so isolated otherwise. I hope it brings her peace...knowing she has someone she can always count on- priceless love and friendship.

    God bless her, and you- dear Sis, it is wonderfully written.

     

    -James.


    • Anulekha
      January 18, 2007
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      it does give me peace but i still feel kind of like the poem states. but mom is the best mom i could have. (My ap mom i mean) and she is there for me and makes me feel loved no matter what. I wish she was my real mom but i still had my grandparents because i love them so much i am scared to death of something happening to them.


    • pattyann4500
      January 17, 2007
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      Aww, thank you, James. You're so sweet with your comments. God bless you, too.


  • leo2
    January 17, 2007

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    I was doing fine until the last few lines then I got confused about who was blaming who for what and who was doing what but I think the author notes and comments straightened out for me. Also I had to break out my magnifying glass to read the fine print.
    Anyway, this poem demonstrates your ability to put yourself in someone else's shoes which is a highly admirable trait.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long

    • pattyann4500
      January 17, 2007
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      Leo! You wear glasses! Sorry the print is too small. I should have thought about that, but I will try to remember next time. I want you to continue to read my work, and you can't do that if I blind you!


  • paullallady silver member
    January 17, 2007

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    great lesson

    What a terrific lesson for any parent, if they choose to really hear it. A child is incapable of raising themselves and really getting it all right. We are suppose to be there to love, nurture and tell them they can't or shouldn't, at least sometimes. This was a warning, and you did a marvelous job with it.

    • pattyann4500
      January 17, 2007
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      Thank you, Sis, and so true. We, as parents, have to teach our children what is right and not blame them for our mistakes. Hugs, Patricia


  • cherche -d -ame
    January 17, 2007

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    how fortunate this young lady is to have youHow fortunate we all are to know you here
    much love,
    xoxoxoxoxo
    reenie

    • pattyann4500
      January 17, 2007
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      Thank you, Reenie. I think I'm the fortunate one. I have so many here to love, and it fills what would normally be a huge hole in my heart. You know, just like you fill part of it as well.


  • Shadow Lynx
    January 16, 2007

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    Excellent

    You are an amazing writer and an amazingly caring person this is so so so lovely and touching,honest and caring and free flowing love on the page ,love it !!


  • perdisbeaute
    January 16, 2007

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    That is so sweet Patricia, you must have great love for that ap daughter of yours. This is amazing and precious!!!
    Love it!
    Michelle

    • pattyann4500
      January 17, 2007
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      Michelle, Sweetie, I adore all my AP family. That requires a lot of love, since I have a really HUGE family. Thank you for your lovely comment. Hugs, Patricia

  • Anulekha
    January 16, 2007

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    awww your gonna make me cry. this is so SWEET I love it!!! Thank you so much for being there. And I don't care if people know about it, it's life. AWWWW this is so SWEET!!!!

    • pattyann4500
      January 16, 2007
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      I just wanted you to know that it ISN'T your fault that your mother ruined her life. A woman gets pregnant, and everyone immediately blames a tiny baby. The baby wasn't the one who did anything!

      I'm glad you liked this, Sweetie. Love, Mom

      • Anulekha
        January 16, 2007
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        of course. I know I mean yes she messed up but atleast she tried and did the right thing by giving me to my grandparents, and she was 17 when she had one of my brothers so i mean she has had it bad, but idk i love her but idk. But mainly they blame me for her mess ups like i was the one that laid there, ha ha i wasnt even a baby- i was an egg lol. yes i loved it.

        Love,
        your peanut

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