snow falls from heaven
sparkling on the way down
glimmering flurries
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critique me!! I stink at haikus!
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I like it. It may be short, but it's still good. I especially like the second line, because I like how it almost gives you image of glitter falling from the sky! hee hee... ^^
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Well... i guess if you like these three-liners, its okay, but i dont really like them. There are some exceptions to that rule though, i like short poems that are really clever.
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I'm not convinced...where is the "ah" factor?...I would expect snow to sparkle and to melt....and why is it falling from heaven. Dear God, try again....Love, Myron.
snow falls from heaven
white blankets cover the ground--
pure angel's kisses -
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You know what. I give up.
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