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Felicity of the Arcane Glass Hearts

My descry of Love…Inference of It’s Twisted Game…A Heart of glass...So Fragile and Tenuous...Relinquished so Innocently...Felicity of the Arcane Within…The Game Stirs to Life...Scars of the past Prevalent…Tapered with New Hope… Broken many Times in the Past...Deleterious Remnants… Beautiful intentions Recompensed with Pain…Game Enjoying every Moment…Writhing on the Sorrow...Shattered at every turn…Sailing Tears Inside each One…Flowing A River…The tide of Affliction…Swirling around this Host…Melancholy Ambience with no Escape...Empowerment to this Jester…A Glistening portal at My feet…The Shards of Trust .. Closer I gaze…A Familiar touch Radiates... Feeling the Pain and Love…Now Conscience of it’s Keeper…Fate’s whisper Chilled in ear…The Mistress of This Forsaken Love…I Envision her Sweet Face...So Sad in this Season... This Crestfallen soul…My Own scent of Yearning…The Angel I’ve longed for…Unable to Fathom Her love cast Asunder…This Sick Joker…Laughing through Face...The Line Crossed in mercury....To Play the Game in carousels…Grasping Shards lost in dark...My Love’s Happiness in Hand… Pure Love flows in…Felt the Power in my Palms…Growing and Breathing...Chime rang beat…In Harmony with my own...The Rules have Gone askew…The Game of Love…Tears flickered nevermore…The Sweet Pulse Engulfs my soul….Concealed Precious Heart…Protected in Vicious adoration…Within Myself…Crimson statue Revealed…A true Glass Heart in Hand...Powerfully Thrust into the Dark…Love Floating Through Dark Power…Laughter to Mock Choice...In Foresight I smile…Silence The Only notion…Death in morning Clouds…An explosion of Stars...Hidden in Dark...Fallen Heart into Dust...Sparkling in Air…Glowing Stronger…Shine engulfing all Ashes…Light fighting every corner…My Sacrifice…Heartless As I stand…My Loves Soul numb…Not Feeling at All…Gleaming Purely…Radiant orb from Embers…Brilliant Manifest like Midnight…A Gyro Traversing...Ravishing Back into my Chest…A Rule of Love… Paradox amends Game...Ignorance Instills Downfall in Degradation… Though I Knew All the While…True Sacrifice…Unselfishness in Passion…True Love blinked…Sweet Oblivion…

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 20, 2007
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    Nice piece. Thanks for entering! Good luck in the contest.


  • -darkprincess-
    March 17, 2007

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    great!!

    i have to admit that you have a talent, this is very deep, and i loved it... but there is one problem, you havent sent me the pic, so, i'll let you participate, ONLY this time, but you will be under the others, i mean, you poem has to be totally best from the others for me to choose it...
    anyway, great poem, and you are a very talented person, and the way you write, is perfect...
    kisses!

    (* pau


  • Cannonsfire
    January 20, 2007

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    You are so very talented and so deep, truly too deep for this small heart to really understand more than a modicum of what you describe within these metaphorical walls you have built with your pen. I find myself saddened by some of this, a closure of sorts to a part of life, love perhaps then uplifted to a place where maybe you regain your own strength of soul and conviction to go on, perservere lol I don't even know if I am close!?


  • RavenChild
    January 19, 2007

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    you are right I am not disappointed your poem is powerfully moving and an enjoyable read. You have a lot of talent. I'm impressed enough to add you to my favs.


  • NicotineHeartbreak
    January 19, 2007

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    An amazingly powerful poem, your words flow so beautifully across the screen. My favourite part has to be:
    'Fallen Heart into Dust...Sparkling in Air…Glowing Stronger…Shine engulfing all Ashes…Light fighting every corner…My Sacrifice…Heartless As I stand…My Loves Soul numb…Not Feeling at All…'
    I just think it is so beautifully tragic and painful.
    Peace

    x x


  • tomisb
    January 16, 2007

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    This shows mastery of phase and image

    Understanding of rythmns and an good sense of the image as a statement. Quick short definitins, impressionistic and individualistic. Sometimes the attempt to express a new form gets in the way of the message. It still in the end is a love poem. It is full of touches. Passion. Desire and of course a modicum of pretense.
    final judgement you got it working but you need to come to the jams more often. Love, Tom B.

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