Honesty was my oxygen
Then lie by lie
Betrayal by betrayal
The good I saw in people
Left as my last breath was exhaled
I'm not yet dead
But my life support has failed
Asleep in a dream of a fake reality
Where I will stay
Until a Dr thinks they've 'fixed' me
Please tell me what you think
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Awesome
I liked this one
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I know I have rote about this already but I keep reading it and reading it and it is never getting boring, even reading it on my phone all the time too. I think it is my favourite poem.
So well written and so well rhymed.
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This is one of the best poems ever hunni!
The beginning still sounds like its about me, which is annoying but I can't help but love your poems!
Its short but sums up a lot in 10 lines.
Well done
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Awesome!!!!
Hmm, very interesting! It made me think awhile about what it really means. I'm guessing (don't get mad at me if I'm wrong...I'm really bad at deciphering poems...) that it means you feel dead because people have lied to you so much that nothing is real anymore. So, you live each day with nothing to hold onto...but the last line still gets me.
"Until a Dr thinks they've 'fixed' me."
I'm guessing you mean a pshycologist type of doctor, and by fixing you, you mean doctor's think they help you feel alive again, but you'll never be...???? I don't know...that's probably not even what it means, but that's what I got from it.
I LOVED THE POEM...
GREAT WRITE AND KEEP WRITING!
*Snap*
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