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rebirth

the candle's flame
having died
so long ago
leaving this world
dark and cold
flickers once more
to light up my world
did it ever really die
will it again fully thrive

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like my favorite form of writing, this has nothing to do with a candle

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  • Becca24
    January 16, 2007
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    I like your poem

    I like the way you express your self. do some more poems.