We met on AP after forever apart,
Each of us wrapped up in our lives.
The destiny within each of our hearts
Was to meet and in God's love abide.
As Christians we had put our trust in the Lord,
Traveling paths oft dark and unclear.
God led us to each other's doors,
And therein was banished all fears.
When love is true uncertinty dies;
My dearest, our love is so real.
God has bade us to be husband and wife,
Brushing our souls with love's zeal.
To all of our friends here at AP,
Both the known and the yet to be met,
Please join us in spirit and share in the day
When our futures are destined to be set.
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to all of our ap friends, we wish you as many blessings as we have received.
stephen, dear, as you know, this is for you. next week cant get here too soon!
Please tell me what you think
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This is sweet, and it's a nice story; I think it's wonderful that you found each other again on AP. The rhyme is well done as well!
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Soooooooooooo Beautiful!!!!!!
Dee, I am so sorry that I have not been here in a while to read your lovely work. I am so happy for you and this was such a beautiful write that you did for your love. You have all my best wishes for a wonderful life together. The words from your heart flowed effortlessly and touched my heart. You have brought such a smile to my face and made this an even more wonderful day to be alive. Thank you for sharing this loving write with all of us. Love and God bless you always, Joyce
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this is so very sweet. the love you write about here is awesome. thank you for sharing your words with me today, both through this and through your comment on my write. viyanna rosemarie
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Great work DEE. Sounds like love is in the air. Great way to start off the new year. Good luck with Steven and your writing.
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This is a lovely poem that you have penned here Dee, very romanitic and full of lots of love
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niceness!
awesome write. I loved the poem mom, you know that though. I am really happy for you. Congrats!!!!!!
~Holly
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One thing I appreciate in a poem is skilful use of half-rhyme or suggested rhyme. I know this poem tells your own special story, and I wish you both happiness.
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Beautiful
You have expressed you joy and happiness about the two of you being brought together, and I wish you both God's blessings. I had met a man on AP a while back, but unfortunately it wasn't meant to be.
I love this line: "When love is true uncertinty dies;"
Lovely write.
Ethereal Melody
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Wonderful news... Blessings upon you both... Happy, happy, joy, joy.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser
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Yes so simple
I just hope that I don’t ever make you
Regret the day you loved me.
As God as my witness I love you Dee
I forever my Love your shadow by thee.
So simple is it not I love you. your steve
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