I thought you loved me,
You said you wanted my heart.
I now know,
It was an act from the start.
Promises were made,
All secrets were told.
On the line my heart was laid,
The real you I unfold.
Love words were spoken,
Bodies once blended as one.
Your love was my token,
Now my tears fall by the ton.
We knew eachother inside and out,
Of this I now have doubt.
My thoughts still circle that night,
All of the shit you said.
At first it felt so right,
Now my feelings for you are dead.
Every time we made love,
You thought of another.
So I hope you're happy together,
You mother-fucker.
Years later, as if on cue,
Here are the happy two.
You dare to glance my way,
Start to speak, as if everything is okay.
I can't stand this anymore,
I turn to both of you.
Happily, I raise a toast to the whore,
And I say Fuck You!
A contest entry
- Losing a Lover by Eternal Rose.
375 points, ended February 15, 2007, 19 entries
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the title is rather strong , but best of luck in the contest
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amazing poem, i loved it very much!!! good luck in my contest and thanks for entering!
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WOOOHOOO!!!!!!!!
Very uplifting!!!!! lol I think youdid a great job writing your feelings down. I loved the way she expressed it in the end. -
Wow
What a surging title and as I read on i now see why. It is so easy to lay your love out to get smashed by an unthoughtful person. For if they truely loved you they could never bring to you such pain..Great write ......Michael
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Shight! Thats good..
That is sooooooo good. Im book markin it...haha
can i place this on myspace blog?lol hehhehe
later
love your writes...
And happily, I raise a toast to the whore, And I say FUCK YOU! thats a classic.... Love It!
Later
Green Mother Rose
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LOL for the ending- but I really like the entire poem babe. The story line is great- something a lot of people can relate to. Good write hon- luve ya!
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