Everything hurts nothing is real
It's like an angry electric eel
Why does this pain always happen to me
It won't go away, it's like a dog with a flea
You're left with a wound that lasts forever
My mommy has pants made of leather
I feel pulled down, nothing left to go on
It's like my wicked cool friend Shawn
What's it all worth, things will never be right
Me and my teacher once had a fight
There's no where to go with this life you chose
My dog was sick and had a wet nose
Fallen and unable to stand
The farthest I've gone is holding hands
I'm always down, no way to get back up
I walked up to a black man and said SUP
I've lost my motive, I've lost my soul
My mommy cuts my hair with scissors and a bowl
My life is spiraling it is too much
It's like drinking chocolate milk and such
I can't control this any longer
I was failing English, because i told my teacher he was wronger
As life goes on things only get tougher
I’m in the Remedial class so my teachers don't suffer.
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday To You! (Prewrites Acceptable!) by SnappledApples.
600 points, ended January 31, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Surprise Me by Fall.Of.Rome.
900 points, ended February 3, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I need cheering up by Aeonna.
400 points, ended January 21, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Only 4 EMOS!~those of you who cut heres your chance by Frozen Tranquility.
341 points, ended February 11, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - humor sequal by LilMrsAttitude.
700 points, ended February 8, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
I thought I'd already read this one? LOL Deja Vu! Okay. Lots of random thoughts. Interestingly written. Thank you for entering and good luck.
~*DJ*~
I'd hate to have to DQ you for not following the rules. -
-
haha im sorry..it is pretty random, but thats just the way i wanted it, just stupid i guess..thats the way i roll haha
-
-
Nice, but it wasn't exactly what I was looking for. I was thinking a long the lines of a more upbeat, fun poem. Cute poem, though!
-
hehehe, I am sorry if this poem is not meant to be funny but some of the place really cracked me up. Its like you are very serious and then a funny lines comes into play. I was weaving back and forth on my emotions on this piece. I Loved it
Good luck in the contest and I hope you place in it Cotton
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
