My Love
You showed me
how to love again,
how to feel life.
You took me,
damaged with a
broken heart,
placed it in
your hands
and slowly mended
my wound.
I knew from
before our
first kiss how
I felt for you.
It was that kiss
that sealed
my love
for you
forever.
My Vow
On this blessed day
I stand before you
under the watchful
eye of God,
our family,
and friends,
swearing my love
to you and only you.
I shall stand
beside you
holding your hand,
taking each step
with you
as we walk down
our path in life
that God has
chosen for us.
I will lift
your spirits
when they
are down.
I will laugh
with you and
I am sure there
will be times
I will frown.
I will guide
you when you
need guidance.
I will comfort
you when you
need comforting.
I will be the
other half of
you that makes
you whole.
I will be
your love.
I will be
your life.
I will be
your everything.
for
The rest of my life
I love you
Author notes
For patrick my love, these words I speak before you on the day we vow our love before God.
In a list
A contest entry
- vows,marriage,divorce,seperated..till death did you part..pw,s ok.. by Honeydew.
450 points, ended March 9, 2008, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is really great..lots or rhyme ..its really beautiful..if it were me i would change the very last line to help it rhyme all the way to the end..i would perhaps put..the rest of my life..then add i love you on the right hand side of the ending of the poem...yet this is your poem and this will someday be your vow..just a sugestion..thank you for your entry.
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Soo very very beautiful! Words are inadequate to describe how wonderfully this is written! I wish you two all the very best of everything!
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Terrific job. Now you guys have the vows. Please thell your mother this one little thing. WHEN is the WEDDING. Great work it was simply beautiful.
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Thank you for your comment, I am hoping for a fall wedding if all goes right.
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This is absolutely beautiful!
Rose, Just a note to say congratulations! I too know what it is to have your heart broken and shattered, but also to have to have it mended by a wonderful man! Happy tears come to my eyes reading this! Thank you for sharing... debbie
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Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it. Patrick is a wonderful man and I am so glad to have him in my life.
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ohhhh, thisi s godlen you did a great job on this. it is amazing keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Thank you very much I appreciate your comment
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This is the most beautifully expressed sentiment I have read. Your words are full of heart and love. These will make wonderfully spoken vows, no doubt. Excellent!
Storm
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Thank you very much for your comment, I appreciate it
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Wonderful a tender heartfelt
piece Mistress Rose
should bring tears to one and all
Roses to you
Teresa
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Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it.
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Ok my love, I am crying these are the most beautiful words I have ever read. As, I look forward to our wedding day with much anticapation......I love you with all my heart and soul.
I Love you
Patrick
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Thank you my love for this comment, i'm glad you liked it and these will be the words I speak before you at our wedding.
I love you with all my heart.
Elizabeth
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ohhh Mistress this is beautiful!
He will love it.
You have such amazing talent my dear. You are both so wonderful together.
May you have many more years together. Love each other always and forever.
Your slave
Wicked
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Thank you very much for your comment, Yes he did love it and cried aftyer he read it. Ilove the soft side of a man.
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wwww this is lvely elizabeth
I am sure they will touch Patrick to the veryy core of his existance very well expressed 
Love and light,
blaze
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Thank you much for your comment, these are the words I plan on reciting at our wedding.
Liz
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