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Ambush

Missing image
Awaiting very still,
Creatures watching,
Waiting to kill.

Forest dark and deep,
Travelers seeming unaware,
Walking without care.

Dropping from trees,
Attacking swiftly,
Screaming in rage.

Suddenly tables turned,
Fire lashes,
Bodies burn.

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  • Malabu
    January 17, 2007

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    This reminds me of Nam

    all that is missing is the smell of napalm
    very thought provoked and deep......recolections of something far more scorching to the mind but to the reality of its truth, may it lay dormant.


  • pattyann4500
    January 15, 2007

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    Umm, goodness! This is scarey, my dear Edward! Do you need to talk, Sweetie? Great piece, my friend. Picture is excellent with this. Hugs, Patricia