i 'm always acting like im fine covering up the pain help deep within.all i want to do is scream let someone know how i feel. my parents are on my case about everything. i reach for the razor and start to cut one it ain't going to hurt it is just one whats the harm. then one ends up following another and another until i'm coverd and blood and shaking so bad. i can't seem to see through all of these tears i have cried. sadness is running through my veins not knowing what to do. thinking people are oblivous to my life.
please tell me what you think!!!!
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sadness is running through my veins not knowing what to do.
I love that.
That's an awesome line.
Nice write.
I've been where you're sitting in this poem-
Emotional.
Nice write again**
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wow, i liked this. very well done.... i understand some of these feelings keep writting
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Well, hon, i'm not oblivious to it. I am in the same spot and i understand it all. it hurts and plastering a smile on your face hurts and hides everything. It makes it a lot worse. and cutting helps at the time but trust me, in the long run, it's not so great. i think i posted a poem called History book on my arm. you s hould read it. and if i didn't i will. trust me, it gets better. it gets worse before but then it gets so much better and you can smile and even love again. just hold my hand and i'll take you there.
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yea you can scream and tell someone how you really feel... then they will screw you over! the only thing running through my veins is cold blood... there is nothing else there. i want to tell you thing will get better maybe later rather than sooner, so keep you chin up
i wonder if i'm being of any help or not 
*jessica*
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