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Please Believe

 

Like so many seeds
cast across the field
we begin our lives by chance

if all is well
and we are wet by the rain
but not flooded away

and the sun falls upon us
but does not bake us into oblivion

we have a chance to grow
and show our incredible bounty

yet life is everything
from blessed to beaten

and we are immersed in a fallacy
of unreachable self perfection

we defend against the mirror
and study close every known imperfection

and memorize it well
as if... it truly mattered

To you I say
if you were loved you are blessed
if you were not... create your own

let no one assess you
that does not say your name in care

look in and find every wonder
that was blessed upon you at birth

and write your story daily
knowing we will win and fail in portions
equal to the good we make... deep in our heart

when I see you
when I read you

I remember my self
struggling to find my way

wishing to become a life of value
discovering by surprise over time

I was there all along
hidden beneath my own self doubt

waiting to be found
by me

You will become what you believe

 

 

 

LeeL





Author notes

I write this for the many that strugel with their own imperfection.

I will give the name of the woman I wrote this for, after she reviews it. Done

From my mind, I give these words to Amber Danielle

If we can look at ourselves stright away, and accept the good as well as our self persecuted alledged failings, we have a great opperntunity to concure ourselves and find peace thru deep acceptance.

There is little perfection in this world, just many very human mortails, wishing to immitate God on earth.

My favorite saying from The Book is...

"Man fully human, is God`s greatest glory"

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  • Wow this is beautiful.... I love the flow and the meaning behind it... Well done indeed. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    • Endeavor gold member
      July 3
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      Hi Mandy


      Pleased you liked my words
      Thank you for saying good luck

      Rick

  • paw-writer silver member
    June 3
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    Beautiful!

    This is completely incredible. Thank you so much for sharing this with me. I am deeply moved, and feel as I am sure many others do, that this could have been written for me. With your permission I would like to print this so I can read it daily. Of course I will give you credit on it. This is truly beautiful beyond words. Blessings, Patty


    • Endeavor gold member
      August 1
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      paw-writer


      Feel free to re-print this
      Thank you for feeling the words so closely
      You must see yourself in this

      I wish you well, Rick
  • Wow, This is so beautiful and has given me hope. Thank you friend. Thank you so much for sharing with me your wonderful masterpiece In my heart this is GOLD

  • The Lady
    May 31
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  • Katie Lazette
    April 27

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    Beautifully written. I like the words "I was there all along, hidden beneath my own self doubt". These words are so true. This is really a wonderful write. Thanks for sharing Lee....Katie

    . Rewarded 4

  • I really appreciate this poem, because i am going through this right now, struggling to make the most of myself and who i want to be. This was a great poem, and thanks for sharing.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    April 27

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    It take tiem to find ourreal self as you said. The magic word is Belief. With Belief we create the Magic within ourselves to see what lies hidden in our soul.
    Congrats on your new life to start soon with Trista!

    Return the favor-Read my poem Dare to Dream


    • Endeavor gold member
      April 27
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      Dragonheart


      Thanks for reading me
      Beliefe is and can become magic

      Not Trista... Lisa

      I will come and read Dare to Dream

      Rick

  • Pisces rainbow
    February 15

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    imperfections, so often we define ourselves from an image. as shallow as it is, humanity creates it, we never look within, the image we see can change who we are and what we project onto the world. I believe this image is what creates evil and hate in the world, we need to love ourselves to bring love into the world, to do this we need to focus on the inner instead of the outer, when your beautiful within it will shine out into the world. excellent. you indeed will become what you believe excellent God bless


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 15
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      Hi Pisces


      I agree with all you say
      Thank you for getting so much from my words

      We say who we are, what we believe
      Thank you for your thoughtful comment

      Rick

    • Endeavor gold member
      February 15
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      Hi Pisces


      I will write you later, Rick

  • BarefootSoul silver member
    February 7

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    I love this as it reflects the inner war that so many of us have not just women. I could read this as if you had written for me and that is the beauty of this poem. I often find that fear wins at times even over truth and I imagine God knows this too. I've tried to write a poem to express what I feel at this point in my life and it fails me. The hopes and aspirations of a midlife awakening. The awakening is scary for it is a time you realize that your body grows weaker, your dreams are unfilled and not knowing how to make them so, especially for a woman with poor health. There are many things that bring us to an ugly image in the mirror but if we fight that fight and refuse the lie slowly like a plant growing we emerge to become the visualization of what focus upon. It takes all the strength I have to remember it every minute of the day and yet the hidden truth...

    wishing to become a life of value
    discovering by surprise over time

    I was there all along
    hidden beneath my own self doubt


    • Endeavor gold member
      February 7
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      Barefoot Soul


      Thank you for reading my words
      I appreate your thoughtfull comment

      We are always most critical of ourselves
      Accepting the stages of life is most usefull

      Thank you for the three smilies

      Rick

  • TillyMay
    November 19, 2007

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    Wow (and I don't say that lightly)
    This is beautiful and power packed with simple truth. The flow and rhythm is flawless- the words lovely and you've strung them together with mastery.
    Beautifully done.

    Tilly


  • rainb0w l0ve
    November 17, 2007
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    ooo this one was good 2

    wow i really like your writing it is very good and is encourging thanks for letting me read this


  • Lady in Love
    October 27, 2007

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    For words for a friend. Those that do struggle with words, or in life seems so unfair. When their hearts are so full of giving. Sie was right your poems are wonderful.

    Tish


    • Endeavor gold member
      October 27, 2007
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      Hi Lady


      Sie is very kind and a good writer in her own right
      Thank you for reading this, not my usual style

      Love to have you read "Forever and a Day" or "My secret Heaven"

      More like me

      Rick

  • Midoriko
    October 20, 2007

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    wow, I like this. it's wonderful! Congradulations on your bronze trophy! keep up your amazing work!

    Crimson

    • Endeavor gold member
      October 20, 2007
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      Crimson


      So pleased you liked this

      Please read somthing elce in my focus poems
      This is outside of my style

      I thank you, Rick

  • Quicksilver dreams
    September 25, 2007

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    wishing to become a life of value


    wow, cuz this isn't me. or, really, every other person in the world, i suppose.
  • moeiscool
    September 23, 2007

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    I love your poem. its really nice. i like the rhythm and rhyme. my favorite part is the last sentence.You look like your a good poet.Keep up the good work and wright more good poems.Comment my poems to please!
  • nothinghere silver member
    September 8, 2007

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    I felt tonight as if this poem was written for me, I struggle with an illness and so visable it is after treatment that I can be treated in the cruelest of fashions, just yesterday a child being held onto by his mother, not old enough to know any better (yet the mother was) poked at me and says, 'Lady, My mum says by the look of it you are gonna die soon' I smiled at the kid, as i walked through the door of my home i couldn't contain it anymore.... I know people don't mean to treat others with such disrespect but it comes out in the honesty of the words of a child. I wish I could look in the mirror and see what you believe we should all see..... Brilliant, may I print this one to put on my bathroom mirror dear one?

    ok now the tears are off again.... I will leave my comment here....

    Love to you Rick

    Karen


  • blondone silver member
    August 18, 2007

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    Oh I love this write and the truth pours from it great flow and imagery adds to the read it is most beautifully written and thank you dear friend for entering it into my contest...

    • Endeavor gold member
      August 18, 2007
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      Hi Blondone


      My pleasure to enter

      Thank you for caring for my truth and words

      Rick

  • A u r i e l l e
    August 11, 2007
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    I like the last line....It's really deep to me.

    "You will become what you believe"

    • Endeavor gold member
      August 11, 2007
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      Aurielle


      Thank you for seeing into my words

      Glad you like my thoughts

      Rick

  • MY lips will deny
    August 3, 2007
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    it did not give you my three applause, so i will try again. i did and it is not working for some reason. guess i will have to try later. chows

  • MY lips will deny
    August 3, 2007

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    i think there is alot of greatness written in this poem. another of my faves from you darlin. keep up the writing skills. i'm sure you have alot to offer and convey to many out there. lots of souls to reach.

    • Endeavor gold member
      August 11, 2007
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      Dawn


      I realy appreate you reading this

      There are some I have reached with these words

      Rick


  • xcoldxtruthx
    August 2, 2007

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    that was really deep...

    "if all is well
    and we are wet by the rain
    but not flooded away"

    i like how u compared that..it could mean so many things..it makes me wonder..is rain, love from family, understanding, education? it has endless possibilities

    -kaily


    • Endeavor gold member
      August 2, 2007
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      Emo


      Thank you for read my writing

      I wanted you to know of this

      Thank you for the thoughtfull comment

      Rick

  • Endlessdreams
    August 2, 2007

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    this poem is great

    I can completely understand this poem, everyone in there own way is a self doubter. There is no perfection, in life and this poem is a great write.... i would of thought of something like this. There is bueatiful write in so many ways


    • Endeavor gold member
      August 2, 2007
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      Hi Dreamer


      So nice of you to read me

      This is a little different for me

      Please read somthing elce

      Rick

  • moon2u silver member
    July 29, 2007

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    I understand this one

    I struggle with self doubt myself. Your poem speaks of believing in yourself, knowing that we all struggle along the path, there will be good times and bad times...remembering there is no such thing as perfection...for we are all flawed, all we can do it the best we can.
    What a beautiful poem....I really enjoyed reading this one this morning. Just got home from work
    moon2u


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 29, 2007
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      Morning Moon


      If I could
      I would lift you up, and show you the unseen good that all of us leave behind, if we are caring people

      I blame Madison Avanew for the curruption of our own mind, and the destruction of our self immage.

      We are what we were ment to be
      Man, fully human. We all have our gifts

      I thank you for reading me

      Rick
  • bergettigirl
    July 25, 2007
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    Absolutely beauful write. exceptionally done.


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 29, 2007
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      Morning Girl


      Thank you for reading me

      Thank you for saying beautiful

      Rick

  • Jalalbad gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    enchanting!

    I have no trouble with the spelling.
    Perhaps because I am a bad speller I notice the beauty behind your words, not the mistakes in lettering. The letter kills, but the spirit gives life. I feel love and life in your poem. Where there is love there is light!


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 23, 2007

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      Jalolly


      Thank you for seeing the light
      that is a gift in it`s self for you

      I am as good as the mind of the reader
      Thank you for saying Inchanting

      Rick

  • dubiety
    July 23, 2007
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    some spelling

    mistakes in the author bittybob:
    strugel (struggle)
    stright (straight)
    alledged (alleged)
    opperntunity (opportunity)
    sorry I am in a pedantic mood. Ah well, maybe they'll help


  • dubiety
    July 23, 2007
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    a beautiful

    love poem... I loved it.
    blackburn
  • mysty rain
    July 21, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL!

    Oh, what wonderful words you have penned. All too often we judge ourselves too harshly. And when we start to feel down on ourselves, this is the poem to come back to in order to get the lift we need to once again deem ourselves worthy. I especially like the lines, "let no one assess you that does not say your name in care." How true those words are, for it is those same ones that can destroy our confidence. This is a masterpiece from a most brillant poet. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 21, 2007
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      Mysty


      Thank you for reading my words, so very carefully

      Thank you for your thoughtfull comment

      Often, we know too much

      we are self doomed from

      introspection

      Forgive

      1st

      us

  • Unheard Butterfly
    July 20, 2007
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    This is a Beautiful Poem,
    & I truely do mean it,


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 21, 2007
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      Buterfly


      Thank you for reading this

      Thank you for saying beautiful

      Rick
  • Ametrine
    July 17, 2007

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    I realy like this. I have a long way to go if i wish to get like you. Your poem is realy long and i realy like it.

    Alice,7


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 17, 2007
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      Alice


      Perhaps the differance in our writing
      is the Fifty years I have on you... lol

      So pleased you realy like this
      You get 10 points... Keep going

      Rick

  • x-sweet-cherry-x
    July 17, 2007
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    this is again a lovely poem, true words, and i find your words very inspirational!!! Susan


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 17, 2007
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      Cherry


      If you are inspired
      than I am blessed...

      Words can make us evolve
      and see somthing new, or give us light

      Thank you for reading me

      Rick

  • Roseleaf
    July 15, 2007

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    delghtful

    such true words and lovely that you found and gave it to a person who you feel could grow within with those positive words about oneself truly enjoyed it all so very much indeed thanks for sharing your soulful heart

    love pauline
    keep them coming


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 16, 2007
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      Pauline


      Thank you for finding the truth in my words
      There are better writes by me
      Perhaps "Forever and a Day"
      or "My Secret Heaven" on my Focus Poems
      I thank you

      Rick

  • coffeeangel316
    July 14, 2007

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    this is a great write. I don't think I am beautiful by any means although I have alot tell me so. I know my body is not sexy but this gives me inspiration and thank you for showing it to me. I love the way you write. You are awesome hun


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 14, 2007
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      Coffee


      Others tell you so, yet you do not believe
      Perhaps you should listen
      I say in essance we are too self critical
      Even more distructive, we compair with thoes
      living in a different cycle then our lives
      As Einstien said, everything is realavent

      Thank you for reading

      rick

  • blondone silver member
    July 8, 2007
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    this is so beautiful and the inspiration I recieved from it I love each line as it grows just as we do this is a most beautiful write I love the ending line so so true...thank you for posting this one so I may believe once again thanks Rick for you lovely words...

    • Endeavor gold member
      July 14, 2007
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      Hi Blond


      We are best served when the words are believed

      We say in our mind, whom we are

      We must love our life in measure to none

      I thank you, Rick

  • katina
    July 6, 2007

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    Beautiful Words from a beautiful soul.

    All the best,
    Your friend, Katina


    • Endeavor gold member
      July 14, 2007
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      Katina


      Beautiful picture of you

      thank you for seeing my words so kindly

      Rick

  • sandybeaches gold member
    June 30, 2007

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    I don't think I have ever read this style of writing before (I am green though when it comes to poetry)but I really like this. let no one assess you
    that does not say your name in care...so true. Wonderful words. I am glad I read them.


    • Endeavor gold member
      June 30, 2007
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      Sandy


      Thank you for reading my words and seeing the difference

      You may like others, Rick

  • azlyn gold member
    June 30, 2007

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    How caring and compassionate these words are. I am bound to believe that one must see beyond the surface to find the soul and reality of beauty. I do feel your concern in this piece, for if by sharing our selves with others we are able to shine upon their path but a glimmer of hope, they may find their way. It is a wonderful gift you have shared here. I shall certainly take a measure of wisdom away with me.
    Blessings,
    Azlyn


    • Endeavor gold member
      June 30, 2007
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      Azlyn


      Your words are almost poetic

      I make words to move my mind

      I only wish others to believe

      Rick

  • Gone
    June 26, 2007
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    beautiful

    This really is a lovely piece... I love the idea that if it rains we grow (I consider that to mean challenges falling upon us), but if too much rain falls then we are washed away

    You just put it in a way which makes life seem balanced and fragile


    I really like this poem!


  • myrataal silver member
    June 11, 2007

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    If you were loved, you are blessed

    How true, Poet. Somewhere, somehow we are all loved, if not by mortals, then by the Great Immortal, our Beloved Father, the One and Only God.



    Keep spreading love and Love. May God bless you and keep you.

    Love
    Myra


  • The Fallen Phoenix
    June 10, 2007

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    The imagery in this is very vivid. And, I don't know how you do it, but you manage to get into the woman's mind perfectly and expose what's she's really thinking, what she's afraid to tell the world, yet is longing so badly for the world to know. I feel like I should be thanking you... So, thank you.

  • Granny Goose silver member
    June 9, 2007
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    Oops, forgot I ws logged in as Granny Goose... but we both share the same feelings

    Dee/catz

  • Granny Goose silver member
    June 9, 2007

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    This is a poem written from a wise mind and a gentle heart. Our lives are filled with choices, doubts, insecurities... and overseeing all of that is our ability and need to love and be loved.

    Your poem is so expressive of that, Rick. Your first stanza sets the pace for the rest of the poem and is so right on. We start out with our whole world ahead of us, and even though we're too young at birth and for some years afterwards, to have much say in the way our life goes, we still manage to have a certain control over it. And after that, our destiny is pretty much determined by choices we each make.

    A beautiful write, Rick. As always you've opened us up to the meaning of love and life

    love to ya
    Dee

  • Kazmira
    June 9, 2007

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    When we inhale a truth...our spirit rises!
    This creative verse is a breath of reason to acknowledge truism...Bravo poet for a great write.
    Cheers Kaz.

  • blondone silver member
    June 8, 2007
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    Oh the words written rings out the truth we are what we believe, very powerful writing the words flow with such ease as I read them and a beauitful image appears so soft and touching

  • flyingkite
    June 3, 2007

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    "yet life is everything
    from blessed to beaten"

    How very true are these words of inspiration. There is nothing of this world that we cannot overcome. In essence, this is what I have gathered from these insightful words. I am left in awe at your ability to motivate the reader through each stanza of poetry written on this page. Congratulations on your trophy win in the contest. You have really strengthened my morale, and I thank you.


    Della

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    June 2, 2007

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    Wow this is very beautifull written!
    I love the way you put this together.
    Your words are very powerful and true.
    Well done with this one my friend and
    thank you for sharing it here!

    I really did enjoy this piece from you.
    Congratulations to you on your trophy
    also! Keep up the wonderful work here!



    Jeremy0826

    • Endeavor gold member
      June 10, 2007
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      Jeremy


      If it was not for you
      I would have no male readers

      Don`t ever leave me ... Please ... lol

      Thank you, Rick

  • bluejeans51
    May 28, 2007
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    So beautifully written!! We all strruggle down that road my brother. I like the way you put it.

    • Endeavor gold member
      June 10, 2007
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      Hi My Sister


      I forgot that I miss you Sis

      So nice to see you read me my friend

      How goes the Cobra

      Rick

  • Melodies silver member
    May 27, 2007

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    Well, first off...

    This is a beautiful poem, filled with your wonderfully loving heart, dear poet! You would be the dearest person to sit next to and share a bowl of popcorn and watch a movie! And lots of other scenes that show real heart! I do hope you are appreciated by a large population where you live.


    • Endeavor gold member
      June 10, 2007
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      Hi Mel


      I think what you said was a great complement

      I am unknown where I live, except for my skills in Realestate

      I thank you, Rick

  • KainLegin
    May 25, 2007