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Mundane Mondays

‘Hello’, ‘Welcome’, ‘Take a seat’
The same old - same old meet and greet
We go through it every week
The same old - same old mundane routine

She looks at my body and reads my mind
Removes the tape from the recorder
Looks back to me, then goes away
Again,
This time to unplug it completely

‘You still look uneasy’
‘Tell me’
What does she want to know
‘Your week’
‘I’m weak’
She knew that already
Her eyes gaze steadily
At the marks before us

Blood red hand prints

Stares and silence

Her 50 minutes are over

‘See you next week’
What for I wonder
‘The same old - same old mundane routine’

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  • OnlyTimeWillTell
    January 16, 2007

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    I dnt no wat 2 say, but it is an excellent poem, ur a brilliant rhymer too.
    well done princess
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  • Piper77
    January 15, 2007

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    Great poem. I loved it. "Same old mundane routine"...that really draws me in. Love the way it rhymes without being annoying. Great write and keep writing!

    *snap*