my angel,
Even if it's selfish..
darling,
I can remember how good it felt.
To stand next to you...
to know that at least one person
was a little more screwed.up.in.the.head
than I was.
Honey,
I could smell our blood,
as it
t-r-i-c-k-l-e-d out
into the twilight
shining better than your glittered-up eyes
better than my glitter-glossed lips.
And you couldn't fool me
with your "fuck.me.now" stare.
I could tell with every strand of
hair-you-cut-yourself
and every pill collected "for later",
that you were the Epitome
of everything I wanted to,
everything I was going to,
Everything I turned out to be.
Author notes
okay... so I really wanted to write something actually WORTH reading.
maybe I'll enter something else later....sorry this is such a disappointment. blehhhhh feel free to DQ ..kay babe?
if this were good enough, it'd be inspired by/dedicated to my amazing angels listed above.
but I don't dare say that, hahah. =] have fun judging
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A contest entry
- Denied, Abused, Broken - Beautiful x by E t e r n i t y.
600 points, ended January 25, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This Poem=Ultimate Perfection <3
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"I [can] tell with every strand of
hair-you-cut-yourself" what a crash you'll make.
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=]]]
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wow. i really like this.
amazing as always.
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"to know that at least one person
was a little more screwed.up.in.the.head
than I was."
Darlingggggggg.....
Stunning. Really.
I'm at a loss for words here. && "stunning" barely even begins to cover it. Buuuut I'm sure you get the point.
<333333
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heheh, well thank you babbe! xox
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Abouslutly everything you write is outstanding
its a stunning write!
i love your works!
And you couldn't fool me
with your "fuck.me.now" stare.
I could tell with every strand of
hair-you-cut-yourself
and every pill collected "for later",
i loved that part
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....... ________________________________________________________ .......did you feel that??? I just KISSSSSED you!!!
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Honey,
I could smell our blood,
as it
t-r-i-c-k-l-e-d out
into the twilight
shining better than your glittered-up eyes
better than my glitter-glossed lips.
omg, love. i wish I had written this..it makes me jealous.
I lovers yous.
♥
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well I lovers you times one hundred!
xoxoxoxox
muah!
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Your poems are so amazing for me to read. they let me know that I'm not the only one.
I think you are incredible.
and I am a tad bit jealous of your talent.
this was wonderous.
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heheh thank you danielle! =]
xoxxx
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EVERYTHING you write is worth reading.
Sweetie you've got an amazing gift.
And its honest
and brutal. it makes me feel like I'm all alone and getting the shit kicked out of me. It's just...
beyond words.
Even my crazy little imagination can't think
of words that would do this piece,
or anything else of yours,
justice.
Baby cakes. You're just too wonderful.
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you don't know how much better you make me feel..
I just wanna SMOTHER you with kisses and cuddlings. =]]] (haha the smiley has double chins!)
xxxxxx
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