FOR BLESSED ANGEL
Blessings of love and light come straight from her heart
Leading all souls in the right direction
Every single day her kindness shines through
Sending her heavenly armor for strength and protection
She is a beautiful and sweet angelic soul
Each day leaving you rejuvenated and whole
Deliverer of tranquility and youth
Always by your side and ready to bring you back home
Never underestimate the power of her magical wings
Give her all that you have and so will she
Ever so lovely as she waits for you with open arms
Let your heart fly free in the arms of this beautiful and blessed angel
Author notes
Thank you very much in advance for your comments and review on this write. Please do not add my name to your comments here. I appreciate it!
A contest entry
- Group Contest "Poets with feathers" by Whispering Winds.
475 points, ended January 24, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - FAMILY FOR BLESSEDANGEL by JoyfulWriter.
450 points, ended February 12, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Real nice and from the heart.
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Really enjoyed reading this again! Thanks so much for entering this in my contest. Good luck here. Smiles, Terry
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A beautiful tribute to someone you so obviously adore. i am sure she will love it! Best of luck to you in the contest!
Frogz~ -
Great acrostic you have penned here - so much information can go into lines of a poem like this, and your sentiments are well expressed and easy to understand in this write.
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This is such a wonderful write for Terry. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and to write such a wonderful poem. You always amaze me with your words..
Many blessings,
Tammy
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Beutiful!!
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This is so flowing and sweet. Just a beautiful write. You have described a very loving and beautiful person. Good luck to you in the contest.
Jeannie
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Surely dude,.. surely..
i'll surely and blindly fly freeeee in the arms of that beautiful and blesses angel.. wonderfully done !
Keep the pace,..
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Nice
Nice dedication, I'm sure she feels blessed now.
"Always by your side and ready to bring you back home
Never underestimate the power of her magical wings
Give her all that you have and so will she
Ever so lovely as she waits for you with open arms
Let your heart fly free in the arms of this beautiful and blessed angel"
Nice last stanza.
Good work.
Kind regards
Previn -
awesome write
I've known Blessed Angel for over 2 yrs, and this is such a beautiful and true dedication, for she writes awesome poetry, very emotional and full of love...bravo on a great write...smile...David
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Not so sure I liked this poem as much as I do others of the same topic. It seemed overly pressed and forced, and lacked any real unique imagery or new twist to an old idea. Its put together very well and flows wonderfully, but it could have been made superb if there had been some new or quality imagery in here. Instead, I find that it is rather dull and made up of bits and pieces from every other poem about angels that I have ever read. However, the lines 'She is a beautiful and sweet angelic soul
Each day leaving you rejuvenated and whole' rhymed exceptionally. Keep writing, I'm sure your other pieces will be better and better
Avian xx -
Lovely acrostic, beautifully penned, loved the flkow and the words you speak. Good luck.
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Beautiful!
Such a wonderful description of a lovely friend who is an Angel to many...
We all love yam Terry...
beautiful Acrostic!
Lynda
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Lovely
A splendid write here, flowing with an angelic feeling from beginning to end, soft and feathery! This was a pleasure to read and a contender for something shiney...coming your way
~Tia
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I simply adore this! Smiles, Terry
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