Don't show your pain, your guilt
Cold blooded and lead hearted
Leave the trail deserted and dangerous
Justice can't deal with the departed
Show no remorse, no thoughts
Live in isolation, show no fear
They never cared for you
Laugh when a victim sheds a tear
Never give up right till the end
Mutated, blue in the face
They can never get revenge
They're dead no need for haste
Let the victims stay locked away
In the depths of your mind
Author notes
This was written last year when i was questioning life. It kinda came from somewhere in my mind that rarely shows itself. Sorry for being quite dark!
Written June 3rd, 2003
A contest entry
- I must be insane. PREWRITES! by borrowing.moonlight.
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hmmm made me think. i wonder where you get the serial killer outlook from this. anyway nice write. thank you for showing me that side of you =]
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Ah, simply beautiful. The lifestyle you have explained was done amazingly vividly, and I can just picture myself there. The wording you used was well done too, and this is definitally going to be saved and put up on my wall. Great job at accessing that level of emotion, and please continue to write :-)
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scary disturbed a piece of artwork
That is a little creepy but what can i say i am a little creepy myself, that was a great poem, u have a talent u should have more keep up the good work
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Heh Heh. I'm the kind of person who loves a good dark poem, and you have created an excellent one. No need to be sorry either LoL. Thanks for the awesome read! Great job again!
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I like it. I feel that more people should be like this. **thinks evil thoughts**
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