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Vision Clears - Value The Time On Earth

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Somehow instincts, hopes, focus light to anticipate evolution. Change expanding beginnings, - prepare opportunities, let metamorphosis rare free self ...

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Self free, - rare metamorphosis. Let opportunities prepare beginnings, expanding change. Evolution anticipate, to light focus, hopes, instincts somehow.

 

 

Vision as longings underpin energy, tenderness, harmony, evolution. Time insight may, extending opportunities new, ever allow, rewarding the self.
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The self rewarding, allowing ever new opportunities extending. May insight – Time evolution, harmony, tenderness, energy - underpin longings as vision.

 




Vision clears, we’re somehow made aware
As new age dawns and instincts stimulate

Longings that at last hopes liberate.
Underpin win focus, everywhere
Energy frees inner light, to share
Tenderness, emotions, to create
Harmony which may
anticipate
Evolution, understanding where
Time time defies. Change may initiate
Insight, expanding vision up to date,
May mark end of beginnings, demonstrate,  
Extending frontiers, promise to prepare
Opportunities for future fair.
New looks not back, let Fate precipitate
Ever clear metamorphosis relate,
Allow pure second state prepared and rare.
Rewarding worth the spirit shines to
free
THe self for new dimensions, - learns to be ...

Author notes

The first letter acrostic of each line spells VALUE THE TIME ON EARTH

The first word of each line, in Green reads TOP DOWN:

Vision as longings underpin energy, tenderness, harmony, evolution. Time’s insight may, extending opportunities new, ever allows rewarding the self.

The first word of each line, in Green reads BOTTOM UP

The self rewarding, allows ever new opportunities. Extending, may insight – Time’s evolution, harmony, tenderness, energy, underpin longings as vision.

A WORD in PURPLE ITALICS each line, when read TOP DOWN, gives the following phrase

Somehow instincts, hopes, focus light to anticipate evolution. Change expanding beginnings, - prepare opportunities, let metamorphosis rare free self ...

Thus the SAME WORD in PURPLE ITALICS in each line, when read BOTTOM UP, gives the following phrase

Self free, - rare metamorphosis. Let opportunities prepare beginnings, expanding change. Evolution anticipate, to light focus, hopes, instincts somehow.


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Comments

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  • A very unique and intriguing write, my friend. I like the way you expressed yourself, and 'tis a bit of a brain twister as well. (lol) Thanks for sharing this one.

  • ears2hearyou gold member
    August 25

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    Applause-Applause!

    This was a feast of poetry!
    Thankyou for a proper meal!
    It was very rewarding indeed!
    ears/Seattle
    fantastic!

    . Rewarded 4

  • Combining all the different forms that you did is quite the feat, I applaud you. Great write!


  • Darkwell silver member
    July 25

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    This was harder then the Mensa test in a good way Brillient messaging inside messages wrapped in lyrics an im guessing this is a polycrostic? Wowz

    Totally
    Reaching
    Incredibly
    Understood
    Metaphors
    Presented
    Here

    WTG! Good luck in the contest

  • SpydurPoet silver member
    July 28, 2007
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    I cannot find words to describe your style, but I'm kind of addicted now.
    Write on!
    ~*~SP~*~


  • ChildeOfChaos
    January 17, 2007
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    Wow!! I read this poem and liked it. Then I read your notes and loved it. Now I'm just kinda blown away by the complexity of it all. Awesome piece, it seems like it would have taken forever. You're really talented.


  • klassy lassy
    January 15, 2007

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    I would venture that New can not look back without becoming Old. "Allowing second state prepared and rare?".... B coming! ? It's not with eyes that you see.

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