Blade of Grass
Grass
Lies in wait
For a summer breeze
A soft breath to cool it’s back
Blade
Split
The wind divides around me
Whispering its voice
Soft pleasing
Blade
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The mirror oddquain has a syllable count
of 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 1, 7, 5, 3, 1,
In a list
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Oh I like this This is awesome dear. Excellent form and nature poem WowZa!!!
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ohhhh...nevermind..that was a one..and on a different lyn another one...ops sorry...haha
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GREAT JOB...i must say once again..but just a question...in the author box...you said that there is a 11 sylable lyN????i dont see that...or did i miss it??? anywayz...gREAT JOB...and...um...WONDERFUL...haha..BYE!!!
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Wonderfully expressed and written
Nice write very descriptive way to portray a blade of grass. (Lisa)
"Split
The wind divides around me
Whispering its voice
Soft pleasing
Blade"
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interesting. i've never seen this form befor. maybe some day i will have to try my hand at it. unfortunatly i am mroe prone to classic styles. sonnets. and simple ABAB ryhming. not very origina, but hye its what i do. this is very cool form. good job
Good Write and God Bless
Pastoral Poet
Ben B. -
Exhilerating!
This is an enchanting write that
sweaps you off your feet and takes
you on a ride of natures many wonders.
Great imagery and emotion -
Cute!
The wind divides around me
Whispering its voice
I like how this is very sensual I can feel as if I am standing there!!
much luv~
shadowed
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