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A Moment Like This

A moment like this
darkness within
inside of me
what misery beholds
beckons

A moment like this
in a night like now
you're like the sky
amazing
crushing me with your all

A moment like this
it is almost you
silhouette
a shadow from behind
an impending reality

A moment like this
them
another me and a you
my aching heart cries
sounds of wave crashing

hollow
A moment like this
gentle as air
cruel to the touch
tonight I engulf in flames

One
Just one moment like this
Memories flood in
My tears will cause a tidal wave
And I will become an inferno

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  • Seeking Peace silver member
    January 16, 2007
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    Wow, what a sensational write, this is a way in which this picture has not been interpreted before in this contest, I think this is full of wonderful imagery

    Thanks for entering this contest, I wish you the very best of luck

    Karen