upside down and inside out
how do i forgive the unforgiveable?
should i even try?
will you be ok if i don't forgive you?
will i be ok if i do?
who means more to me?
even after the betrayal
i'm afraid you do
i wish life was black and white
instead of a thousand shades of gray
Author notes
Option 4 as well as a 1 and a little of 2.
In a list
A contest entry
- Slough of Despond... dark poetry contest by gasolinequeen.
550 points, ended February 10, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Work in progress, it's not quite right yet, any suggestions?
Comments
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I like how you ended it, with a thousand shades of grey. The title drew my attention as well. This is a poem that is short but sweet, and thank you very much for sharing it. Best of talent in the contest!
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very well said/written. can completely understand and relate. as im sure many can. thoroughly enjoyed. was well the read.
blu
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Wow, touching peace for sure keep up the work.... i like the message beyond this peace... and the words you chose. i also like the flow it's very smooth and i like that it makes for an awesome poem.... alot of meaning and passion is visible in the poem.... i love reading about peoples hearts..... this one though makes me sad... but nevertheless keep writing cuz you are very talented and don't let anyone else exspecially yourself tell you different....
With Love,
Tim
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