bitch dont be talking shyt bout my man. u can keep wishing u had him. but u neva will ok bitch,slut,hoe,hoer,and worste of all stripper .he dont like u he like muah better than u. hoe dont talk shyt if u dont even know jak.josue carlin like me nd not chu bitch.if u call me a bitch well guess wat u can suck my pussy u lesbo.no 1 like u u hoe. i dont think u got jak to say know u hoer.
plz/please love this and tell me wat chu think
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lol, I see you are venting in a poetic arena, I hope you have the steam to continue posting and sharing with all of us here. By the the way... The picture is classic!!!
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I see no poetic quality in this piece at all. You have simply chosen this venue to post a rant with every mean, nasty word you could think of infused. On a learning note... I do have a few things to say here. For instance, it has been my experience that most people will take your work a little more seriously if you avoid spelling short cuts. It has a tendency to "cheapen" the appearance of all the hard work you put into your creative writing. And while I am here, let me say, welcome to Allpoetry! I hope you find us to be a helpful and friendly place for posting your future works. I encourage you to take some time to wander the site and check out all that we have to offer here. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact any greeter here.
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Um, I kind of understood it. Maybe you should pull it slightly out of atrocious chat speak and into just regular chat speak at least. Maybe into regular language so it might actually be kind of poetic. I definitelly got the strong meaning from it. Although I dislike the fact that you used lesbian as an insult. But each to their own I guess. Welcome to AllPoetr.
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man this is so tight man.
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