i didn't know it
at the time,
but i guess my dad was right
when he said:
"friends are the ones
who screw you over the worst
because you trust them"
so now
i sit in the dark
behind locked doors
because nobody
is allowed in
In a list
A contest entry
- Trust by doughjoe.
1000 points, ended January 18, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Work in Progress. Any Suggestions?
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I love the message and imagery in this one. It flows perfectly and the tone is perfect. Thanks for sharing this one with us here at AP. Great write! ~Peace ~Gary
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