Patiently sillhoutted against the darkend sky,
Time surrounds you in a sigh,
Tonight yellow moon, please waft on by.
Author notes
I'm not a very patient person and have often spent time watching the moon go by, trying to make time move faster for whatever I'm anticipating the next day.
A contest entry
- Guiding Light by Dreamer With Dreams.
385 points, ended January 15, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please kindly tell me what you think
Comments
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Very detailed. I like the wording and imagery of your write alot. Good luck in the contest

