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The Moon's Time

Patiently sillhoutted against the darkend sky,
Time surrounds you in a sigh,
Tonight yellow moon, please waft on by.

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I'm not a very patient person and have often spent time watching the moon go by, trying to make time move faster for whatever I'm anticipating the next day.

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  • Dreamer With Dreams silver member
    January 14, 2007
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    Very detailed. I like the wording and imagery of your write alot. Good luck in the contest