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I.O.U. One Universe

I walked around with my heart on my sleeve...
      I dropped it many times...
Leaving it bruised and broken.

Soon, it was nothing...black and forgotten.
I left it on the street, blind to everything.

Then you walked up to me...
                            I think you dropped something,
                                              you said.
        My heart in your hands...
Your heart on your sleeve, I took your hands and held it tight.

Kisses mean nothing,
Word are worthless,
I'd give you my heart, but it still lays safely in your hands
                                            yours to keep.

I took paper
          and wrote in blood.

I.O.U.
      10,000 stars
      1,000 planets
        100 worlds
          My life
        and 1 Universe



Author notes

To mike.
I hope 1 universe is enough.

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  • Poetic Aphrodite
    January 20, 2007

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    Beautiful.

    oh Sweetie this is just beautiful, your love for Mike shines through so deeply, you are both so lucky to have each other, love you always Mom


  • the man
    January 19, 2007
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    Can I have a universe pls


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 15, 2007

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    this is good, you have done something great with this, i like it you are one of a kind keep it flowing and good luck in the contest