Stone Heart
your heart is like stone
can not be penetrated
it can be broken
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An unrhymed Japanese poem recording the essence of a moment. Nature is combined with human nature. It usually consists of three lines of 5/7/5 (5 kana in the first line, 7 kana in the second line, and 5 kana in the third line) totaling seventeen kana.
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Marvelous
It's amazing how it's so simple yet truthful. I've loved this type of poetry for a long time but I've never had the ability to write any so it's good to see that someone else can.
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I just stumbled upon this. It's very fine, with an exquisite last line.
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Great poema expressing a simple truth in just a few lines.
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Lovely haiku
Interesting twist in the third line...it can be broken. Yes, how true! -
This is beautiful my little teacher*hug*now i see, if I can just do:))
you are the Queen of prefect style:f:f:f:f:f:f
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short, to the point, and beautiful...well done...
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dang
That is crazy I love it though and yeah very ethnic tahe Mucho lovio ito lmso Lol sorry I am tired and my mind is warped -
Captivating
This is amazingly beautiful in so few words
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Profoundly beautiful, Bella
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