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A Great Regret

She keenly felt the lose of the only
thing she had to offer

She wanted another
LOVED another

And yet she gave herself to the man
whom she simply Cared For

He loves her deeply she knows
and he is honored by the gift
she's given him

But she lied

He asked her not to regret it
and she said she didnt and wouldnt

But here she lays
tears of regret
coursing down her cheeks

She now realizes
that what she had to give
really was THAT precious
and how much she wanted
to give it to her LOVE

But
she lost him because
she betrayed him with another

A thing so small and simple as a kiss
so Innocent
turned out to be alot more

And before she knew and appreciated what she had
she lost it
Only then realizing that he was her LOVE

When she felt the desire
to bestow upon HIM
her gift
She was right
it really was was him she wanted
to give herself to first

And yet she squandered it on her Cared For

He loves her so deeply
and is so amazed by her gift
that she knows she gave it to a person
who knows its true value

And yet
she regrets not giving it
in love to her LOVE

The worst part is...
He dosent love her anymore...
And its all her fault...

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