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An authentically aware altruist adorns AP as author artist always a-musing and anathema all argument

Wishing wonders wander-Swannee signs
As author artist always aired a-musing
Never nasty. Nature nourishing
Dreams dainty, diction dense, distinct, designs
Awareness, authenticity aligns.
Linking laughter light leal lady lending
Endless enjoyment, efforts ever spending
As altruist adorns AP assigns
Breathless beauty, bounty bears, beshines.
Rhyme reel rhythmic talent rendering,
Anathema all argument appending.
Yawning years yet youthful yin-yang's signs,  
Turns to thread trust, truth, then tenderness.
ONly ONe ONline ONeiric ONerousless... Kiss

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Angelicsoul
    June 14, 2008

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    "Dreams dainty, diction dense, distinct, designs"

    This is lovely. I also now know it's called "alliteration", I'm not only deriving extreme enjoyment from your writing, I'm learning too!

    She sounds like a very special lady indeed. A beautiful tribute.


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    May 27, 2008

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    Superb

    A fine poem, methinks. However, what the heck does your title mean? You have me very perplexed, indeed.
    Hope all is going well for you.


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 24, 2007

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    "T urns - to thread trust, truth, then tenderness."

    This has a quiet sense of solitude about it, Jonathan ~ much like me, I suppose...it makes us pause & ponder our own existence...there are many layers that require us to unveil our own thoughts in perspective...An impressive acrostic, penned by your talented, knowing hand...Good imagery & impressive use of language, grand flow...Well done...Thank you for sharing this part of yourself with us & for entering my contest...Be well, Scribe... Wanda


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    January 16, 2007
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    We coudl indeed go on and on and on and add meanings to her name, of course...you are so wise, you simply blow me away. Yes, she exudes and includes tenderness for sure..and sometimes the tender needs tenderness back.