Headlights before me, heading down this road
So beautiful, so clear, look out there getting near
Reach out and take it, you know its what you want
`Cos I’m tired of this fear, its one I can do without
Headlights before me, guiding my path
So beautiful, so clear, I know your always near
Reach out and take it, know that im beside you
`Cos I’m tired of this fear", let my love surround you
Headlights before me, when there is no car
So beautiful so clear, just lit up like the stars
Reach out and take it, the hand you cannot see
`Cos I’m tired of this fear, know that as an angel
..........I will always be right here
I am your headlights, So beautiful, so clear
reach out, and take it, keep it dear, hold it near
`Cos I’m tired of this fear, its time to let it go
Author notes
Slipperssun
A contest entry
- Nothing Boring by cali951.
500 points, ended December 3, 2007, 104 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I read this like a song. Very very beautiful indeed. Such heartfelt emotion in this. Wonderful writing. More please.
All the best
Wayne
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you've couldnt have written it better..great poem and goo luck in my contest. oh i like the rhyming to
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good work
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Very beautifully written
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I really Loved the way this began, and then carried through so well toward the end, that in itself... was nothing short of shockingly amazinged!!! Every stanza of your poetry here is truly remarkable both individually as well as a whole!!!
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wow awesome I loved the ending of this you being there headlights, Awesome write as always my friend.
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I am your headlights, So beautiful, so clear
reach out, and take it, keep it dear, hold it near
`Cos I’m tired of this fear, its time to let it go
this is golden, you did a great job on this keep it flowing -
this is a beautiful write and great to read to well done hun..
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thankyou
thanks you for being my first entery!!! this is what i wanted the lyrices used and the picture matchs, it was alittle hard to read and follow but reading it a second time made me like it so much more....i love the ending the best "cos i'm tired of this fear, its time to let go"
thanks again for your entery
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i like this
its makes me feel without wanting to know why
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this is a good poem my friend. the headlights of freedom and love. lol. kudos!
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A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
Oh wow!! This is an amazing poem! I was just checking out the contest you entered and it was pretty hard!! I'm impressed! Your a fantastic poet! I wish you all the best in the contest, I'm sure you'll do well because this is great! Keep up the great work! I'll be around to read more of your poems so until then, take care!
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A great write.Its full of emotions.I loved this write.You've done a great job.I loved the read.
God Bless You
Josh
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