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Gardens of silence





Gardens of silence

Overwhelmed by deaf flowers

blindly look intently at me



left alone for themselves

starve for visitors

pine for fresh air



surrounded by sadness

wait for a disenchanting spell

imbibed by savage cold

 

 

covered with clouds

 

utter emptiness choked them



Gardens of silence

Stare at the rusty gate

Locked and bolted

Their eyes forlorn



Gardens of silence

Hopelessly

Forsaken forever



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  • joshuap
    January 14, 2007

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    I loved this write.Its so good.Hats off to you for writing such a magnificient write.You've done a great job here.

    God Bless You
    Josh