Boxes of sweet sentiments
pinched between anxious fingers.
Anticipation
thicker than caramel.
Chocolate kisses,
cinnamon hearts,
a special card
for that special someone.
Tired Cupids,
pink and white,
passed out
on red napkins
next to plastic cups;
fruit punch,
to wash down the sugar rush.
A rose for the teacher,
a shy glance,
whispers and giggles,
cheeks turn hot pink.
I’m Yours
Be Mine
Smiles lined with icing,
tongues lick sticky fingers clean.
Walking home with
a bag full of Valentines.
A contest entry
- Cute valentines. by PoetryPuppy.
425 points, ended January 24, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - THE BEST YOU CAN DO! please enter... :) by LilMrsAttitude.
1600 points, ended March 30, 2008, 66 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Such a sweet presentation on this page - valentines galore. Congratulations for taking silver in this contest. Liked the brevity of the lines, the flow and the sentiments expressed in the verses.
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Here's one:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2376806
Option 1 is childhood memories.
Sorry about the double posting. I don't know what happened. -
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Hey, thank you so much. I really appreciate it.
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Here's one:
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This is cute ...
but it's not cute enough to win this contest. However, it is a good poem in its own way. This is more a walk down memory lane than a funny Valentine's poem.
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Wow. Such a great write. I was instantly transported to elementary school...yikes...don't wanna go there again. lol. Well done. Keep them coming and blessed be.
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AAW!!It brought back fond memories!!
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A cute and heartwarming write. good job.
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Very cute and a perfect summing up. I like the lines about teacher... certainly true. A very nice piece.
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tis the season for valentine cards, surprise gifts hidden lovers backs, flowers love poetry & least but not last all the romance one can get!
Well said and well done my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
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Awww... This is just too cute. There is no doubt that you have certainly captured the essence of what a truly divine Valentine Day should be like. Nice job Danna!
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this does a wonderful job of summing up valentine's day.it shows it with great imagery and doesn't get all sappy.showcases your talent to be simple when needed.my best to you in the contest.
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This is too cute!!! I have no suggestions as it is very well written. It does not surprise me coming from you though. Best wishes in the contest Dana, this is a shoe-in...
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excellent
Very sweet and adorable write. Wonderful imagery, as you can see the littlest loves walking with their treasured baggy of Valentines.
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your poem sounds yummy
thank you, from Kiarna xxxxx
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Thank you for this wonderful contest.
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This paints a very sweet picture. It brought to mind those valentines parties at school which were everyones favorite, even those mean little boys that used to pull my hair
glad I clicked
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valuable valentine!
Boxes of sweet sentiments
pinched between anxious fingers"wow. I love thse lines! The thought of valentine pleases the mind than any thought .Great write from a great poet!Thank you Danna for sharing. Your page is rich in poetic thoughts and fine novel. I shall go thro' it and give you my comments. your sons are so cute and I am pleased to see them
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A great poem by a great poet.This poem rocks.You are very talented.Keep writing!!!!
God Bless You
Josh
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