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Loveless

Sun sets upon a loveless Earth,
as a seductive moon takes its place.

Heat of the moment gains control,
as all inhibitions fade.

Lust glistens in your dull eyes,
While passion laces your heavy voice.

Loaded words caress my thoughts,
as sensual touches pull me closer.

Tie me to the bed post,
take away all my self-worth.

Bittersweet taste of temptation,
your kiss lingers on my lips.

Battered soul within a worn body,
gone is the night.

A seductive moon sets,
as a new dawn rises upon a loveless Earth.

Haven't written anything in a while...trying to get back on my feet..I know it's rough

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  • Daisuke
    January 22, 2007
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    I see your creative writing hasn't fade away although you haven't said a word to your poor Daisuke But what does he know right? He can barely write something as great as this. Wonderful job Missed chuu Bunchies.

    ~You Missing Link Daisuke