Who will see me through my
Darkest hour
Only you, my beloved
When the sea is seething
And I'm swept overboard
Only you are prepared
To dive in after me
To recue me.
When I'm caught and struggling
You calm me
You free me
A love for me
Beyond all reason.
I long to love you
Ever more dearly
Your wonderous play for me
Has stirred love
Deep in my heart.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is truly loving and lovely!
I've know love such as this - oh what joy it brings.
I'm happy for you, dear. You deserve it.
Now, if it's not human love but it's God's love you're speaking of, well, that's terrific too.
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What a beautiful love song! This needs to have some mellow love-making music to it ... it makes the heart long for that kind of love


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A beautiful song from you heart to the heart of your beloved. Beyond space, through the mirage of time the love stirred by sweeps you overboard and into the stars!
Just wonderful!
This piece had a serene and warm feel to it that felt very much like home!
Marianne
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Oh to be loved beyond reason! What a romantic beautiful piece you've penned poetic.~Suseann





