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acualescent

it has no stem of being
or at least it seems to have none
this is how we started
not how we begun

fragile thoughts incircling
never meeting one another
so far away yet close enough
that they can see eachother

i want to say it
but then i can't
so i go on
with my endless rant

i'm so afaid that all i feel
and all i think you meant
was never really true
my thoughts were acualescent

i hear you laugh across the room
yearning to know at what
i realize it's me you smile for
my heart has hit a rut

wanting so bad to be with you
feeling what i cannot touch
living my life as lies
i have had enough

told to wait and that i will
wondering what comes next
recieving your hugs
that leave me so perplexed

God give me patience
God give me life
God give me strengh
i pray for at night

at the end of the day
i want to know why
we know eachother
but we are still shy




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  • cannilickureye
    February 19, 2007

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    it's not about shy, darling. it's about bad timing.
    i'm growing impatient with you too, my love
    but keep waiting hon, it's worth waiting for.

    i luhh you.


    • Godsbabygurl
      March 25, 2007
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      ha

      the other day at spelling practice we learned that acualescent is a botany term used to describe a plant like ivy or something that looks like it has no roots..
      i asked if it could be used as a metaphor for a thought and mrs.hall was like "i guess, but that'd be a pretty bad metaphor b/c those two things are completely unrelated"
      so i laughed, but i refuse to change the title.