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The wolf and the moon

Ask the wolf
to stand his guard
To bay at the moon
in the sky

To woo the glow
to shine on bright
For without him
the moon is too shy

Protector of
the nighttime songs
The wolf asks
only one thing

To let him hear
the moon lullabies
From mid summer
until the next spring





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  • Huntress silver member
    November 30, 2007
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    Very nicely done.


  • celestial
    June 14, 2007
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    This was beautiful, inspiring...Did I mention beautiful?


  • Blissful Melody
    February 23, 2007
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    One word: Beautiful. This is so inspiringly gorgeous! Is there someplace where I can read more on the relation of the wolf and moon in native american philosophy? You've captured my interest with this and I want to know more. Wonderful write with an amazingly poetic feel.

    Nikido

  • Warrior7
    January 29, 2007

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    Beautiful

    This poem is stunning such a spiritual feel when reading and the imagery you gave was beautiful, wolves rock


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    January 20, 2007

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    a very beautiful piece, very lyrical in it's flow and rhyme. You create wonderful images of a moonlit night and a lone wolf singing to the moon. Very enjoyable!
    Rory

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