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Better Off Alone....

[Girls part] {Guys Part}  [{Together}]


[Which colors run the deepest?
Which wounds will never heal?
How can I understand your motives?
When it's you I cannot feel.]

[It's in your eyes,
You're in disguise,
And I cannot tell.
If it's you,
If you're true,
It's not going well.]

[How does it all add up?
How can it be fine?
If you are never with me,
Never by my side.]

[So I don't know,
Oh I don't know,
Why you said goodbye.
So turn to me,
Don't just leave,
You've killed me inside.]

[So which colors will fade faster?
Which wounds will start to heal?
I still question all your motives,
Because you I cannot feel.]


{Your colors run the deepest.
Your wounds will never heal.
You won't understand my motives.
If it's I you cannot feel.}

{I wish I knew,
How to prove,
You were never meant to break.
But you feel,
The pain is real,
And it's something you can't shake.}

{I slowly look away.
As I'm drowning in your song.
I know that I have hurt you,
I knew it all along.}

{But you don't know,
How it goes,
It never ends the same.
It's in your song,
Was all along,
It never can be tamed.}

{All the colors will fade faster.
All your wounds will slowly heal.
You will question all my motives.
But soon, you will feel.}


{These colors will run deeper,
Until your wounds have healed.}
[I still question all your motives.
Cause you I'll never feel.]

{I'm walking away now...}
[The pain shows through my eyes..]
{But you have given me no choice...}
[And I can live no lie...]

{I'm sorry for,
Wanting more,
And pushing you aside.}
[But can you see?
You're killing me,
As you say goodbye.]

{My tears are falling faster...}
[This pain I can't condone...]
{It's like my heart is saying..}
[That you're better off alone..]

[{So which colors will fade first?
Which wounds will start to heal?
Now that we understand the motives,
That was leading us to feel...}]

{All alone,
Nowhere to go,
As we struggle just to breathe.}
[Do you know?
Cause now I know,
What sets our mind at ease.]

{Our colors slip away now...}
[{We'll heal all on our own...}]
[Our souls will become two again...]
[{Because we are better off alone...}]

Author notes

My first duet.. I love how it turned out, what do you think?

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  • bluelion
    January 13, 2007

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    oh my what harsh words but wonderfully put in this poem the sadness is deep I want to cry just reading them. AWESOME WORK