Fairy Tales are more like love
It comes and goes as it please
One minute you love
The next its lust
But remember we all must bleed
We're more like dice
One though Six
Six is lucky indeed
You must role again
For it will never end
Then one day you'll bleed
The rules to a Fairy Tale
Is more like love
One day you all might see
Good things never last
For we all must remember we bleed.
A contest entry
- Knights Of Darkened Destinies by Tali28.
800 points, ended January 18, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want to Feel The Fiery Passion by EternalFyre.
450 points, ended February 20, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Interesting topic, nice job. Good luck in the contest!
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ok, now i am going to be a little nicer to you than i was to the last two... you at least had some of what i expected.... but as for taking a look at the site... I HIGHLY DOUBT IT! But I do have to say you did better than the last two!
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Indeed
We all must bleed. I like the poem. Connection to the contest, yes and no, but I do like what you have done here. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Tali
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wow is right
This is very different, but it is true ...if you have blood in your veins...at some point you will spill some of that blood. This is fact! The Shaker (Good luck in the contest)
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Wow!
very deep but so true to your words.
its so funny how life works out for us..never seems to be a piecefull moment anymore...but yeah cool poem1
Jammi -
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Thank you. I have also found those things to follow my life
We all must bleed sometime or another. You can check out my
other poems and they follow the same line. My user name is
Dragontuba.
Thank you
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