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Eye To I - HM

I am
I am all
I am all right
I am right
I am

Am I?

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PLEASE DO NOT GIVE ME AWAY BY COMMENTING AND USING ANY SENSE OF MY NAME

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  • nichtmich silver member
    January 13, 2007

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    WOW!

    Succint message here and a darned good question. I am amazed at how you turned this brevity of words into an astute assessment of the photo. Best wishes in the contest!


  • suseann
    January 13, 2007

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    Expresses that void of self proclaimation and self doubt very astutly.Nice short and to the point piece.~Suseann

    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      January 16, 2007
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      thanks Suseann, sometimes I can actually say something in few words...lol.


  • Naznomarn
    January 13, 2007

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    oh wow! That's very well done. I love reading poetry that builds itself up. And hen twists itself half way through.
    Work amazingly here!
    And good luck in the contest!


    • CarolDesjarlais silver member
      January 16, 2007
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      thank you....I was playing on the eye/I and the fact that we can never know the "I" without knowing what it is we put out to others.

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