Dance little Raindrops as you pass me by
I can hear you falling from a gray-blue sky
You are falling softly and are a welcomed sight
I hope you continue to dance throughout the night
The trees are very thirsty and all the flowers here
The grass has lost some color, as other bushes near
I know that you will wash the Earth, oh so very clean
And make everything so bright, and a pleasant green
Thank you Heavenly Father for sending us the rain
I know the sun will shine so bright,When it comes out again
And then we'll see the Rainbow in colors of every hue
Arched across the bright blue sky, it's promise has been true
A contest entry
- Rain. Rain. Rain. by rosie4491.
450 points, ended August 7, 2008, 33 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful Imagery! I could almost feel the rain on my face at night! Great flow and rhythm. Best of luck in my contest!
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katie this is great! it reminds me of summer and makes me feel all warm inside on this really cold blustery day.the rhythm and rhyme are good and the imagery is fantastic!you did asuperb job with this. keep writing. God bless you
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