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Ask Brother Owl

Ask brother owl
to watch the sky
To span his wings
as clouds float by
To hoot his song
for the moon to rise
So we may rest
and shut our eyes






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  • Huntress silver member
    October 16, 2007
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    I like this one very much


  • celestial
    June 14, 2007
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    I love this one to.


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    January 20, 2007

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    hooot hooot

    a very nice read. There are few things as hauntingly beautiful as an owl at dusk, flying through the sky in search of prey.

    You've captured a very spiritual feel with this piece. Well done.
    Rory


    • FifthDove
      January 20, 2007
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      Thank you very much Rory for the comment. I appreciate it very much.