My mind swims...
These thoughts engulf me with such vivid images of passion...
It's a sin, I know...But how can one completely become void of such desires?...
We humans live for human contact...
We are made for comfort...
For love...
I wish to repent! I wish to rid myself of this burden!
But...
For one who has never shared herself...
For one who knows not the warmth of the embrace of a man...
To rid myself of such thoughts would be more than difficult...
More than impossible...
I look to christ for guidance...
I look to christ for strength...
For any way to become that much closer to Him...
But I know my God doesn't wish me to be alone...
He know's of my desires, how can we hide anything from Him?...
I believe He will bring me the one He has chosen for me...
When he arives...I will want of only him...
When he arives...I will think of only him...
For God will make sure I will want for nothing...
And my thoughts will be of only my husband...
My love....
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Please critiqe me! I could use all the constructive criticism I can get! Thank you for your time,
amela
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Deep write. And so true. You have such a way with words. God bless you in all that you do.
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wow! So True
wow! Amela! You've truly out done yourself this time! I cantotally relate 'cause just last week, I wrote a bad poem. It wasn't your typically"Ugh, I don't like this poemit sucks!" kinda thing. No, this was bad like lustful, nasty, dirty bad. It was bad like," ...you know you want me. I see you staring at my butt. You are so longingly looking at my womanly curves. Come into me my darling, make love to me or suffer. Touch me, lick me in places you've never seen before"... I think you get the idea. after I read it, I had to delete it and repent. But then, when I went to sleep, my mind started to wander and I did something I promised myself I'd never do again- I masturbated. I felt SO awful!!!!!
Your poem has given me hope and shown me that, God created us to want this but, in the right content. Thank you SO much. May God bless you now and forevermore! Luv ya!
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I read in the bible somewhere (I'll have to look it up) that it's your thought life that defiles you...I figure you don't think about it as much when you write it down. Write your erotic poetry and post it. You will get alot of people who will understand what you're going through.
No one should judge you for what you write or do. What you do is between you and God. Just because you're a christian doesn't mean these feelings go away or they suddenly change because you're christian. No. God know's what you want and what you need. You're feeling this way is common, you're not the only one. It's in our nature to want human contact! Don't worry, Intimacy is not bad, we just need to be patient and learn to wait.
All of God's blessings upon you always,
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Ok. You may not think about it when you first write it but, eventually you're gonna have to read it again. And when you do, your spirit SHOULD convict you because even though you may be "of age" to write stuff like that(by the world's standards) doesn't mean you SHOULD! That's what happened to me. I remember the title('The way you make me Feel) and the first two lines," The way you make me feel is this: Nervous and shy when I see you watching me bat my eyes. Being inconspiuocuous. Blowing butterfly kisses." that's all I remember, all I want to remember. It was awful!
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Ya know...
I haven't read my previous comment, but if you feel you have committed sin and are ashamed and repented...I'm proud of you. God is also proud of you. I keep telling people this: God forgives you so much faster than you forgive yourself. You punish urself.
All of God's blessings upon you always,
Yer sister in christ,
Amela
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