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Know Thyself





once again there is a man
hiding in my closet
who has an agenda much different

than mine
and I cannot help
but accommodate him

regardless of my thoughts

 

I will accept him with open arms

be he leper or tax collector

after all he is family

and I am finally ready

to be part of it 

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  • NealVisher
    December 22, 2007

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    acceptance of one's self

    did i just see
    a moment of what i 'would' be...

    i can't deny it

    ah, the hope of spiritual angst...


  • 2lullabyhaven
    March 5, 2007
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    Sometimes...lol

    It's best to just take the medicine on down and get it
    finished. Loved this.


  • Goddess of illusion
    January 19, 2007

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    I loved this !!!

    It was if I could hear you residing the poem in my mind... Well, I am left speechless...

    Keep that pen flowing, Allan, with ink that never fade...

    Elm


  • Sylvyrwyng silver member
    January 17, 2007

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    is this man in your closet an aspect of yourself by any remote hope???? ~raises eyebrows to show gray eyes full of a mixture of innocence and impish laughter~ hehehehe I have several different women in mine... lololol

  • a woman to love
    January 14, 2007
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    ingenious...


  • honey bear
    January 14, 2007

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    very good

    this is a real good write my friend ,still... i wish there was a guy hiding in my closet,i am sure that i could *accomodate* him
    joking aside, i love this poem!


    • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
      January 14, 2007
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      I doubt any guy would hide in your closet when he could be busy being accommodated... unless he was gay... but that's another story... just what my building needs! Another story!

      • honey bear
        January 14, 2007
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        i knew my friend would need another story ..hey that will make it HIStory !

  • Sandygram silver member
    January 13, 2007

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    Great Poem!!!

    Well as they say, To thine own self be true. We should all do that and in doing so avoid alot of pain and disappointment in life and love. Wonderful spiritual poem. Thank you for sharing.



    Take care,
    Sandy

  • Fire N Ice
    January 13, 2007
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    OMG!!!!

    Theres a man hiding in your closet???????
    WOW!
    Yeh i get that alot too hehehehehe
    Great write hun


    • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
      January 13, 2007
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      I think yours is there for a different reason....

      • Fire N Ice
        January 13, 2007
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        LOL

        Dont bet on it hun..
        i'd be sleeping with your ass to the wall tonight LMAO!!

        • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
          January 13, 2007
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          And that would be different than any other night how???

          • Fire N Ice
            January 13, 2007

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            Ahhhhh

            See,
            you already harbour worries over what that bad man intends to do,
            Duck tape ya cheks together, just to be safe LOL

            • PerVirtuous Allan gold member
              January 13, 2007

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              You seem to have an unnatural preoccupation with my ass... It's nice, but you're making a bigger deal of it than is warranted...

              • Fire N Ice
                January 13, 2007
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                LMAO!!

                Oh Guru im so sorry!
                come over to IM,
                i'll concentrate on something else hehehe
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