New revolution:
paradigm shifts spin old top
to fresh confusion.
Stage in evolution :
polar bears, pandas bamboozled,
mortal pollution.
Self execution
by men of Man or pre-planned
novel solution ?
Author notes
Linked haiku ... syllable 5 7 5
polar bears http://www.flickr.com/photos/hvhe1/452328929/
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Destiny foretold.
Mankind is a self cleaning solution, what you speak of is the end of time as it was fortold.
"Self execution
by men of Man or pre-planned
novel solution ?"
Let us all rejoice for the travesty called life on this here hell we call earth will soon come to pass and a new order shall rise from these horrid ashes of modern mankind.
I like it, I like it so!
. Rewarded 6
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Uh, wow, nice-thanks for your entry
lol
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Novel thoughts!
I must have missed the gist of your poem the first time around and have come back for a second go at it.
So few words and so many thoughts and this poem makes for a sure winner. Loved the flow & rhyme which was quite unique and revolutionary in itself! Good luck with this choice poem ... See ya when the sea rises as will all be sailin' ... joy
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lol
I was stuck on the polar bear line for a long time lmso they are so cute! but I do love this poem it has a lot of meaning within -
Very nice. Just the sort of thing I was hoping to get!
Not only have you used some more abstract and polysyllabic words, but you've also pulled a little politics too. As well as the Pandas. Uber kudos to you!
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