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Climactic Paradigm Change

 

 

 

 

New revolution:
paradigm shifts spin old top
to fresh confusion.

Stage in evolution :
polar bears, pandas bamboozled,
mortal pollution.

Self execution
by men of Man or pre-planned
novel solution ?

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Linked haiku ... syllable 5 7 5

polar bears http://www.flickr.com/photos/hvhe1/452328929/

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  • awannabepoet
    July 14

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    Destiny foretold.

    Mankind is a self cleaning solution, what you speak of is the end of time as it was fortold.

    "Self execution
    by men of Man or pre-planned
    novel solution ?"

    Let us all rejoice for the travesty called life on this here hell we call earth will soon come to pass and a new order shall rise from these horrid ashes of modern mankind.

    I like it, I like it so!

    . Rewarded 6


  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 25
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    Uh, wow, nice-thanks for your entrylol

  • waydownuponjoy
    February 27, 2007

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    Novel thoughts!

    I must have missed the gist of your poem the first time around and have come back for a second go at it.
    So few words and so many thoughts and this poem makes for a sure winner. Loved the flow & rhyme which was quite unique and revolutionary in itself! Good luck with this choice poem ... See ya when the sea rises as will all be sailin' ... joy


  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    January 21, 2007

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    lol

    I was stuck on the polar bear line for a long time lmso they are so cute! but I do love this poem it has a lot of meaning within

  • Naznomarn
    January 13, 2007
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    Very nice. Just the sort of thing I was hoping to get!
    Not only have you used some more abstract and polysyllabic words, but you've also pulled a little politics too. As well as the Pandas. Uber kudos to you!

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