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Can colour claim to read between the lines ?

 

 

Can colour claim to read between the lines

And paint fey portrait of each secret smile ?

Nuances noting, can it reconcile
Chance extrapolations, sundry signs
Of the mind's ambitions, the designs
Link-locked within a bandwidth waves's confines,
Open doors, which, hidden seem to guide
Unexpected steps to answers bona fide.
Response and recognition each defines
Coded motives which tastes rainbow’s shines
Laser beams of truth which will abide:
An insight into what occurs inside.
If from truth's spectrum something's infra re[a]d,
Much ultra may be drawn for years ahead ...

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The years ahead flagged by those tagged before 

Offer opportunities to grow

Responding to Fate's multi-coloured flow,

Effects' and causes' waft weft spinning sure

Awarding here, withdrawing there, from core

Design to sign unstinting glow.

Between bright rainbow's light cones, rods, below

Explicit consciousness interpret, store

Tressed sense impressions which synapses store

With care to blend fair beauty, scare rare foe,

Enchantment share where wonders fast or slow

ENtwine mind's heady wine with wonders more.

THEme dreams teem, spin, in rainbow's coloured bands,

LINES, walls, dissolve, beams team true hands to hands.

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  • AbidoodleCullen
    January 22

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    Oh, this is so delightful!
    My first impression of this (From the Title) was it would be about romance or little children but it's almost set apart from those categories!
    This was really a fantastic write and you TOTALLY deserved that silver!
    GREAT acrostic!
    The ending is really a good way to pack a punch when you finish!
    Keep penning!
    <3 Abi

  • poets whisper silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    congrats on the silver and nice acrostic. I can't see how it relates to the contest though ... the weaving of colors in and out of ones life? The Title maybe ...


  • Jaffa-
    November 17, 2008

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    That was very imaginative and extreamly clever. I loved the title. ' Can colour claim to read between the lines' You must have a great imagination. Well done fior this poem and good luck with future ones.


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 18, 2008

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    Wow...

    This is Just great..Amazing oh my gosh Wow i am so sorry about this i am lost for words its just so good its different than the other poems in my contest... Nice Acrostic. This is very well written so i like it deeply
    thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck. for you :]]

    xxx--<3--
    Shelly


  • thelovesongwriter
    July 20, 2007
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    clever write!!


  • JULzz- ROLaa
    July 11, 2007

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    haha! not somehting i could do...at least not with it making any sence! very artistic..and not even in a contest? very keeewlies!


  • sshevak
    July 10, 2007
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    Cool Acrostic


  • JazzALTernative silver member
    January 14, 2007
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    This poem is busting at the seam!


  • PaperChainHearts
    January 13, 2007
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    Good poem, I really like it, not exactly what I was looking for, but good nontheless
    Katy
    x


    • Jonathan ROBIN
      January 13, 2007
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      Chromatic Perspectives

      Unknown to most on A.P. - especially those who promote image contests or gaudy author's pages - around 14% of European men and 2% of Asians are colour blind to some extent - and 0,02% of women - like haemophilia it is a congenital handicap passed through the mother

      Thus the sonnet aims at underscoring that vision in all senses of the term depends on lighting, at times on the individual screen and especially on the unique way each individual perceives a specific wave-length corresponding to a precise mathematical scale but in no ways perceived by the individual in identical ways ... Enjoy !

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